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Old 11-20-2012, 08:45 AM   #1
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Editor wanted, incest theme

Hi, I am looking for an editor for a series I am just starting. It has an incest theme (uncle-niece) but is really play between two grown adults. I have the first part and it's 3.5 pages long, about the first sexual encounter between the couple.

I already submitted the story to literotica, it's pending now but I would still like to get some feedback on it. I am a writer-editor by trade but this is my first erotic story. I'm not up on writing lots of dialogue, that's for sure. The story is contemporary style, short paragraphs, some conscious run-ons, first person narrative, with direct, simple language. It's very in the moment without a much background.

But I'll stop talking about it and let me know if you are willing to read it. I can send it anyway you like.

Thanks!
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Old 11-20-2012, 09:40 AM   #2
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Old 11-20-2012, 11:30 AM   #3
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Thanks MistressLynn, I took care of it. Private Messges are enabled now.
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