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Old 10-07-2012, 01:36 AM   #26
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Thank You Twelveoone

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that was one of the best lines i've ever scene, i almost fell in love

and this life preserver analogy is fantastic, sorry i missed this
I agree that KatieJ's "life presever" analogy is, as you say, fantastic!


I still need to work on implementing advice from those who are more knowledgeable.

I am thrilled to hear your reaction to that one line and send you a sincere "Thank You".

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Old 10-17-2012, 07:09 PM   #27
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Not accustomed to dealling with "spammers"! Put the one below on the "Ignore List".
Any suggestions on how to delete would be appreciated.

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Old 10-17-2012, 08:00 PM   #28
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Looks like prose poetry to me
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Old 10-17-2012, 08:34 PM   #29
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Looks like prose poetry to me
I stand corrected Desejo! Thanks for the clarification.

My apology to neineentY!

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Old 10-17-2012, 10:04 PM   #30
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Looks like prose poetry to me
did you like it?
Tut, this boyfriend or husband don't you think laws and regulations Dusi Man

Tut ,this boyfriend & husband
you think laws and regulations !!
Dusi Man @ ugg boots
empty the Azolla , Dusi Man !!
many mouse omelettes ,Dusi Man !!
& rats, cockroaches scurrying @
Sleeping with.women.com

this is the best goddam spam i've seen in years
Sleeping with women
cheappugg suka ,Dusi Man !!
watching her wind ,Huai En !!
Sleeping, with women !!
ah!Well element staves
Qin dance, clutching hand,
Yeah, wink baby !! as baby's delicate white skin tone gets really beautiful - reddens -
more about visit - this woman urchin: watching her wind ,Huai En !!
Sleeping with: women !!
cheappugg suka ,Dusi Man !!
just needs a little more punctuation and ass spanking
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Old 10-17-2012, 10:17 PM   #31
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Old 10-17-2012, 10:30 PM   #32
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did you like it?
Tut, this boyfriend or husband don't you think laws and regulations Dusi Man

Tut ,this boyfriend & husband
you think laws and regulations !!
Dusi Man @ ugg boots
empty the Azolla , Dusi Man !!
many mouse omelettes ,Dusi Man !!
& rats, cockroaches scurrying @
Sleeping with.women.com

this is the best goddam spam i've seen in years
Sleeping with women
cheappugg suka ,Dusi Man !!
watching her wind ,Huai En !!
Sleeping, with women !!
ah!Well element staves
Qin dance, clutching hand,
Yeah, wink baby !! as baby's delicate white skin tone gets really beautiful - reddens -
more about visit - this woman urchin: watching her wind ,Huai En !!
Sleeping with: women !!
cheappugg suka ,Dusi Man !!
just needs a little more punctuation and ass spanking

Bwah hhahahahhahahaha. I think we need Spam as one of the monthly challenges!
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Old 10-18-2012, 07:07 AM   #33
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ah? Pumping Visible,
Frisch weht der Wind
Der Heimat zu
Mein Irisch Kind,
Wo weilest du?
watching her wind ,Huai En?

I ran part of it through a translator
it's a rap song by
Y snoop Yuanyou,
he's big in germany

everywhere over the fact chock - full measure of a resource box!
yo, Y snoop Yuanyou!!

neineentY, joseph 20, vote bots?, wondered how sapposis got on the top list after 6 years,
go sappo go !!!

a resource box translated into English lying everywhere over the my pc
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