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Old 09-22-2012, 08:18 AM   #1
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An honest critique required

I've penned the first part of a longer story. The plot tells of the erotic journey of King Phillip of ancient Greece.

As a first time author, I'm looking for sound editorial advice, including some feedback on the story itself.

Truthful, but gentle with words, if you please

Any volunteers?

Max
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Old 09-29-2012, 06:19 PM   #2
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I've penned the first part of a longer story. The plot tells of the erotic journey of King Phillip of ancient Greece.

As a first time author, I'm looking for sound editorial advice, including some feedback on the story itself.

Truthful, but gentle with words, if you please

Any volunteers?

Max
I might but not seeing a link?
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Old 09-30-2012, 04:00 AM   #3
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I might but not seeing a link?
max_veridius has a PM link, but presumably nothing to the story because it isn't posted yet.
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Old 09-30-2012, 08:51 AM   #4
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max_veridius has a PM link, but presumably nothing to the story because it isn't posted yet.
I agree, snooper. The OP asked for help on a written story, not a posted story.
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