Originally Posted by SynnDee
I have recently submitted a story and although all the comments were positive most asked for more. It got me to thinking. I hadnít considered writing more. I would love for some ideas. Should Hope stay with both Mike and Devin? Should Mike decide to remove himself from the equation? Would you give the twins a major role? Looking for any ideas?
I read you're story, I was very satisfied with how it started. I was mildly satisfied with the ending. But It was all up and down through most of the story, especially with the fathers personality.
I'd say that if you do any spin offs, you should keep it to other people or their sexual excapades. I wouldn't continue any drama between the three.
IE what I meant by keep it to other people was, Hopes friend, show a sexual experience between her and her sister? or perhaps, her father that seemed to like Hope, maybe let him and his daughter (s) have some fun.