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Old 07-21-2012, 08:21 AM   #1
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rivalry between me and another

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i will wrote a story together with another person. a bet/game/etc there its a rivalry between me and another guy/girl/couple when the loser been fucked by the winner. pm me if you are intressed.
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Old 07-21-2012, 08:43 AM   #2
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Hi,

i will wrote a story together with another person. a bet/game/etc there its a rivalry between me and another guy/girl/couple when the loser been fucked by the winner. pm me if you are intressed.
Unless its some sort of Gay concept, including that sort of sexual scene. Then isnt the end result that the two people have sex? regardless of who wins, they will have sex and there isnt anything unusual about that.

I'd recommend something along the line of, the winner can make the loser do One single thing, that could be Anything. And the more they do it, the more Risque the orders become. Though it could be make the loser do anything without the need for repeat performances.
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Old 07-21-2012, 09:01 AM   #3
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yes it can involved gay sex but if i dont like the other guy its not nice to be his toy
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Old 07-21-2012, 10:54 AM   #4
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yes it can involved gay sex but if i dont like the other guy its not nice to be his toy
I wasn't saying put gay sex in there. This is what I meant;

If it was a guy or a girl, regardless of who won, it would end with sex. Makes no difference regarding who won, except possibly sexual position.

I mentioned gay linked sex, in the sense of, if it was two guys / girls, or a guy x girl with a strap on, it could be a more, the winner is the Fucker! which would provide a different sense.

Now lets be honest, if you're in a competition that may lead to sex, would you do it with someone you didn't like / trust?

Now I'm not too clear what exactly you are hoping to achieve with this topic. Im not sure if you're asking for ideas or if you're actually recruiting for a co writer.
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Old 07-21-2012, 12:28 PM   #6
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i think 2 guys or 2 couples is the best.

Together write a story about ourselves. writing together and act the roles oof ourselves.
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Old 07-21-2012, 01:02 PM   #7
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i think 2 guys or 2 couples is the best.

Together write a story about ourselves. writing together and act the roles oof ourselves.
So you want to do an RP or Group RP about this idea? Then this is the wrong place for your thread.

http://forum.literotica.com/forumdisplay.php?f=11
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So you want to do an RP or Group RP about this idea? Then this is the wrong place for your thread.

http://forum.literotica.com/forumdisplay.php?f=11
Aha, sorry can some admin move the thread?
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Where the thread is fine, however I think this story would work better leaving the gay part out. How about two rival couples. The two rival guys make a bet that the winner of the game gets to fuck the other guy’s girlfriend. They are both in high school, however two different high schools, they are the quarterbacks for their individual schools. The two teams are playing for the state championship. The girlfriends are ok with it as they are rivals too.

As I write this I think, I could write this specific story, because wright now there are so many angles in my head. I know it’s a lot different than your idea though. End up spending days on research, so if somebody knows football and interleague stuff that would be great. Saying this I am writing a behemoth right now!
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Where the thread is fine, however I think this story would work better leaving the gay part out.
It seems tesla87 wants a role play, though, and not a story submitted to Lit.
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Where the thread is fine, however I think this story would work better leaving the gay part out. How about two rival couples. The two rival guys make a bet that the winner of the game gets to fuck the other guy’s girlfriend. They are both in high school, however two different high schools, they are the quarterbacks for their individual schools. The two teams are playing for the state championship. The girlfriends are ok with it as they are rivals too.

As I write this I think, I could write this specific story, because wright now there are so many angles in my head. I know it’s a lot different than your idea though. End up spending days on research, so if somebody knows football and interleague stuff that would be great. Saying this I am writing a behemoth right now!
Im totally straight and dont generally read any GM, I only suggested the idea because the way it came accross as seemed.... Dull? because regardless of who won the end result was the same. I just suggested an idea to spice it up. Your's is fine, and while this may have been a big misunderstanding, By all means write it up.
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Old 07-22-2012, 03:38 AM   #13
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Where the thread is fine, however I think this story would work better leaving the gay part out. How about two rival couples. The two rival guys make a bet that the winner of the game gets to fuck the other guy’s girlfriend. They are both in high school, however two different high schools, they are the quarterbacks for their individual schools. The two teams are playing for the state championship. The girlfriends are ok with it as they are rivals too.

As I write this I think, I could write this specific story, because wright now there are so many angles in my head. I know it’s a lot different than your idea though. End up spending days on research, so if somebody knows football and interleague stuff that would be great. Saying this I am writing a behemoth right now!
Plz wrote that story i like it
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Old 07-22-2012, 09:56 PM   #14
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Plz wrote that story i like it
I've been working on another story, I'm stumped on it. I'll go for a walk feel the breeze and see what i'm inspired to write!
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