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Old 06-20-2012, 04:30 AM   #1
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Lightbulb Girl fucks boyfriend's bully

So this wimp is miraculously dating a hot chick. The wimp is being bullied by this hot guy.
The girl is secretly fantasizing having sex with the bully, but she does not admit it when confronted by the bully. However, after several confrontations, she sees the bully's huge cock by chance. Failing to resist the temptation, she fucks the living shit out of the bully. The relationship escalates, and ends up with the two fucking while the wimp is being tied on a chair.

Anyone interested in writing this? I wish I can write a story.... but I'm a horrible writer so. Tell me what you think!
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Old 06-20-2012, 08:06 AM   #2
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I think it would find both strong positive and negative reactions.

Personally, I wonder about the gal's motivations- esp why she sticks with bf.

I'd rather read something inventive, like it turns out bully has puny dick due to steroid abuse. she pretends to seduce him to take pics of him unable to get erect despite her smoking hot bod rubbing against him. she threatens to post these online if he doesn't stop bullying bf, who has both a huge cock & a talented tongue which keep her satisfied, thank you very much...
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Old 06-20-2012, 08:46 AM   #3
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I think it would find both strong positive and negative reactions.

Personally, I wonder about the gal's motivations- esp why she sticks with bf.

I'd rather read something inventive...
Or, write the opening scene as stated and then our undaunted nerd goes into Rocky training mode to reverse the roles. The hotty now wants the nerd ... but the nerd has a new Adrienne in his life. Sounds cookie cutter, I know ... but I have to take a stand for my fellow nerds!

Edit: oh, you said wimp ... sorry for projecting ... /
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Old 06-21-2012, 02:29 AM   #4
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I think it would find both strong positive and negative reactions.

Personally, I wonder about the gal's motivations- esp why she sticks with bf.

I'd rather read something inventive, like it turns out bully has puny dick due to steroid abuse. she pretends to seduce him to take pics of him unable to get erect despite her smoking hot bod rubbing against him. she threatens to post these online if he doesn't stop bullying bf, who has both a huge cock & a talented tongue which keep her satisfied, thank you very much...
Thank you thats what I was thinking. Except I was going to say just reverse the rolls.

I like the idea proposed by sirhugs. I would read and might consider helping in the writing of bully puny dick story.
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Old 06-21-2012, 03:04 AM   #5
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How about rather than being magically enslaved because she's seen a big dick, she falls for him because the bullying allows her to see what a pushover her boyfriend is, and that the bully (however cruel) is at least actively pursuing her and his own goals.
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Old 06-21-2012, 04:22 AM   #6
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Again with all the big dicks... what is with this preoccupation with big dicks?
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Old 06-21-2012, 06:33 AM   #7
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Again with all the big dicks... what is with this preoccupation with big dicks?
This is the reason I do not put body part sizes in my stories, for one, I am happy to be just an average sized dude. Also because a woman's body is beautiful in any size.
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I think it would find both strong positive and negative reactions.

Personally, I wonder about the gal's motivations- esp why she sticks with bf.

I'd rather read something inventive, like it turns out bully has puny dick due to steroid abuse. she pretends to seduce him to take pics of him unable to get erect despite her smoking hot bod rubbing against him. she threatens to post these online if he doesn't stop bullying bf, who has both a huge cock & a talented tongue which keep her satisfied, thank you very much...
Or on a related note, she could truly love her boyfriend, but finds herself attracted to the "bad boy" bully. He could treat her poorly or completely ignore her, which drives her wild.

When she finally gets him to notice her, she "discovers" the small penis and the fact that he only cares about himself getting off and when he's done, rolls over, the opposite of the boyfriend, and she's left unsatisfied but still drawn to the bully.
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Old 06-21-2012, 10:00 AM   #9
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Or on a related note, she could truly love her boyfriend, but finds herself attracted to the "bad boy" bully. He could treat her poorly or completely ignore her, which drives her wild.

When she finally gets him to notice her, she "discovers" the small penis and the fact that he only cares about himself getting off and when he's done, rolls over, the opposite of the boyfriend, and she's left unsatisfied but still drawn to the bully.
Or I'd say just let her have sex with the bully (who has a big dick). Depicting the unfaithfulness and the immorality of a girl being attracted to a "big penis" is not ethical by any means, but it will make a good, hot erotic story.
So there can be two versions of the story - one with the "bad ending" where the girl cheats on his bf with the bully, and the other with a poetic justice.
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Old 06-21-2012, 10:04 AM   #10
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Or on a related note, she could truly love her boyfriend, but finds herself attracted to the "bad boy" bully. He could treat her poorly or completely ignore her, which drives her wild.

When she finally gets him to notice her, she "discovers" the small penis and the fact that he only cares about himself getting off and when he's done, rolls over, the opposite of the boyfriend, and she's left unsatisfied but still drawn to the bully.
Those were me feelings too, that she would be attracted to him because he was strong and confident and a bad boy, rather than the size of his cock. Her boyfriend could be average sized and okay in bed, but he treats her like a Princess and is too gentle with her, almost like he’s afraid she’ll break. She’s drawn to the bully because he’s the opposite of that, and she finds she likes being treated like a piece of meat for a change.
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Those were me feelings too, that she would be attracted to him because he was strong and confident and a bad boy, rather than the size of his cock. Her boyfriend could be average sized and okay in bed, but he treats her like a Princess and is too gentle with her, almost like he’s afraid she’ll break. She’s drawn to the bully because he’s the opposite of that, and she finds she likes being treated like a piece of meat for a change.
I had a story like this in the works, but have been unable to finish it. I feel I have a good idea in my mind on how to do this theme, but when I try to put it on paper, it just doesn't do it for me. I hope someone can pick up this idea because I really like it.
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Old 06-23-2012, 05:43 AM   #12
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I had in mind something like this: http://www.literotica.com/s/the-practical-joker
But without marriage involved (boyfriend-girlfriend set in a school)
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I've dusted off the story I was working on and may give it another stab. The couple are recently out of college and the Bully is a little older but very much with the jock mindset. The main problem is the relationship of the couple to the bully and having it be believable that they'd continue to associate with him.

I also like the idea that the bully is only a neighbor rather than a boss or something like that. So instead of actually having power over the couple, he takes the power position through his charisma.
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I've dusted off the story I was working on and may give it another stab. The couple are recently out of college and the Bully is a little older but very much with the jock mindset. The main problem is the relationship of the couple to the bully and having it be believable that they'd continue to associate with him.

I also like the idea that the bully is only a neighbor rather than a boss or something like that. So instead of actually having power over the couple, he takes the power position through his charisma.
When will you finish writing that brilliant piece?
And what would happen at the end?
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When will you finish writing that brilliant piece?
And what would happen at the end?
I have a lot of it written, but the main sticking point is the relationship between the bully and the girlfriend. I envision the beginning and end, but the making the middle believable is proving to be difficult.

As for the ending, I have a few ideas, but am not sure where it will go. I don't like the theme of the boyfriend finding out and either being ok with it or accepting it. I also don't like the everything gets wrapped up nicely ending. I am open to any suggestions on the direction of this story.

I have had a bit of writers block, but I'm hoping this idea will motivate me because I really do like it.
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Old 06-28-2012, 05:56 AM   #16
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I have a lot of it written, but the main sticking point is the relationship between the bully and the girlfriend. I envision the beginning and end, but the making the middle believable is proving to be difficult.

As for the ending, I have a few ideas, but am not sure where it will go. I don't like the theme of the boyfriend finding out and either being ok with it or accepting it. I also don't like the everything gets wrapped up nicely ending. I am open to any suggestions on the direction of this story.

I have had a bit of writers block, but I'm hoping this idea will motivate me because I really do like it.
the middle:

does he blackmail her?
or is she overwhelmed by attraction, either just because it is taboo, or she likes the variety?
or is it ongoing curiosity?
or does she keep saying "never again" but then bf goes out of town, or they have a fight, or he works late, and she gets lonely & horny, that old nasty combination...
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I have a lot of it written, but the main sticking point is the relationship between the bully and the girlfriend. I envision the beginning and end, but the making the middle believable is proving to be difficult.

As for the ending, I have a few ideas, but am not sure where it will go. I don't like the theme of the boyfriend finding out and either being ok with it or accepting it. I also don't like the everything gets wrapped up nicely ending. I am open to any suggestions on the direction of this story.

I have had a bit of writers block, but I'm hoping this idea will motivate me because I really do like it.
Well then how about the idea of the two having sex in front of the boyfriend? That way the boyfriend will not ok it or accept it. But the scenario is kinda hot. And watching the bully treat the boyfriend like shit, the girlfriend gets turned on.
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I can see the appeal, but I don't usually enjoy stories that big up bullies. Just not my thing. I'd be much more on board with some of the other stories people have suggested, where the bully kind of "loses" in the end.

Still, it's up to you how you write it, and I'm sure you'll find an appreciative audience whatever your approach. Good luck.
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I like this idea, but I would go in a different direction than the OP about why she fucks the bully - femdom. How better to protect the nerdy little fellow she so desperately loves? I mean, if she's enamored with the bully, why fuck the bully in front of her b/f, unless she's become a bully, too?

To me, it would be interesting for it to seem as if she's enamored with the bully. She seduces him on the side. Rocks the bully's world and I mean, really rocks his world, until she has him eating out of her hand.

Potential endings.
  • She does it to protect her wimpy b/f and is satisfied with the results.
  • She set-ups up what seems to be a cuckolding situation, where it looks as if she's going to fuck the bully in front of the b/f, except, that's when she turns the table on the bully.
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I like this idea, but I would go in a different direction than the OP about why she fucks the bully - femdom. How better to protect the nerdy little fellow she so desperately loves? I mean, if she's enamored with the bully, why fuck the bully in front of her b/f, unless she's become a bully, too?

To me, it would be interesting for it to seem as if she's enamored with the bully. She seduces him on the side. Rocks the bully's world and I mean, really rocks his world, until she has him eating out of her hand.

Potential endings.
  • She does it to protect her wimpy b/f and is satisfied with the results.
  • She set-ups up what seems to be a cuckolding situation, where it looks as if she's going to fuck the bully in front of the b/f, except, that's when she turns the table on the bully.

I like this better too
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The way I see the girl and the bully, she flat out owes him. One night she was walking home and was attached by a couple of vicious gang punks, and the bully broke it up and left them running off. So he's got at least a bit of a good side. He saved her from being raped. In her mind, she owes him, and if and when he wants her, he can have her, anyway he wants. Of course she loves wimpy and could never part him.

Both of them get her off, because she gets off rather easily, so that's not important. The story would be about the continuing conflicts in her own mind.
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How about this for a switch up.

The girlfriend is actually very much in love with the nerd and is pissed off at the bully.

She asks him to stop, but he won't.

So what she does is she tells the bully she wants him and meet him at her place to fool around.

He arrives and they start to fool around, she gets him to strip and then says she likes it kinky. She ties his hands to the bed, then kneels between his legs.

As he lays there thinking she is going to blow him, she removes a strap on from under the sheet, puts it on, lifts his legs and fucks him in the ass with it.

She then tells him she taped it and if he ever bothers her boyfriend again she'll put that tape up all over the internet.

Any takers for a story where a woman is strong willed and not a slut?
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Well, because I post so many bi-guy stories, I can take the idea in that direction, too. What if she finds out her beloved, wimpy boyfriend goes both ways? Heck, maybe that's why he gets bullied by the other guy... maybe they have a past and the bully is pissed that it's over... crap, now I have plot bunnies jumping all over the freaking place and no time to write any of them!
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My twist to this would be along the lines of the girl hates the bully for picking on her boyfriend. She is attracted to his personality and mind, not physical; whereas she is a straight-out babe.

She pleads to the bully to leave her boyfriend alone...maybe put a slight incest twist on the bully is actually her cousin or a close friend of the family. The bully decides what better way to totally crush the boyfriend than to make the girl sleep with him, so convinces her if she sleeps with him, he'll leave the boyfriend alone.

She agreed and they go on with their lives until maybe college, when she's still dating the boyfriend and the bully comes back into their lives. Possibly he belongs to a frat the boyfriend wants to join or something, but has some sort of power over him. He lets the girl know he'll consider it if she sleeps with him once again.

Advance a few more years later...the couple is married and the company the husband works for is bought out by a huge conglomerate that sends over their top man to get the company back on its feet...and guess who it is...

Think you see the way I would write this, hehehe....
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I definitely like the idea, someone wrote one for me along the same lines called "Dani & Mike's Dilemma" where the spin is the boyfriend was trying to figure out why his ex (pre Dani) broke up with him for this jerk of a guy. Kind of like a bully. Well it is all about the confidence the guy exudes and the lack of it by the other guy. I see that for your story, she is put off by the nerdy guy's lack of it and she sees that this bully is full of it. She knows he is a jerk but still feels an urge to let him have her. If he has a nice cock that is a bonus but not a requirement. As long as he takes her in a way that shocks the nerdy boyfriend it can be very sexy, maybe the bully gets to do anal with her which she never would allow the nerd just to create even more anxiety for him.

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