TheYoungAzreal
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The Ideal Vampire [Lit, closed for Insidious_World
[OOC: I don't expect posts this long by any means! But I wrote it out for fun as the entrance post. The character that the story would continue with would probably be the man. The description of the storyline can be found http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?p=36912615#post36912615 ]
Clara didn't consider herself to be a terribly soft woman, blonde-haired petiteness aside. She had worked on the force for many years, broken many fresh vampires to the work and many young agents, too. It was possible to continue to feel human because she believed in the cause, in the neccessity of it. There were so many people in the world who deserved to be safe, and so many threats against them.
But she would at admit that Rafael had been a bit special for her, vampire though he was. He was passionate, expressive, a challenge, and she found she had enjoyed getting to know him in the past three years.
It was easy to tell what he was thinking by the set of his lips and an indistinct feeling in the center of her chest. Different though they were, their bond was deep and old enough for her to know at a glance that he was as afraid as he was angry; afraid or despairing, or some combination-- the first was as often as not tight and hard in his chest, while the second, when she had felt it, ranged from wild hysteria to deep suspicion, and it made it difficult to tell them apart. Whatever it was, it didn't suit him at all. The Rafael she knew was proud and vain and biting, and it pained her to see him like this, no matter how much she'd like to deny it.
"I'm being reassigned. There's nothing I can do about it."
"Go to hell," he snapped back, tone acidic and drawl thick, the rare vulgarity coming out very sincere. His vowels were drawled but his consonants had sharpened after years of mandatory speech lessons. He was understandable now. "See me oh so uninterested in the petty beauracratic excuses. They will stick me with some pathetic, power-mad novice only interested in humilitating dominance displays because I have proved ultimately too obediant to you."
"Rafael..." She wondered if he was really so self-centered that that seemed like the real reason for it to him, or if he was just grasping at straws. His former handler had manhandled him into something like neurosis, and the alternating attitudes of defiance and fear had sometimes made it hard for her to see how far she had to go to convince him to listen.
The ideal vampire, in her training regime, was secure in their submission and obeyed because they understood the benefits. It was difficult to motivate Rafael, even once she'd learned how much he loved music, art of any kind. He'd tried his best to keep it from her, no matter how great his enthusiasm; perhaps because of it, really. He thought she would try to take what glimpses of it he got from him.
In reality, she wished she could have indulged him more often, even if it was difficult to do so with their strange hours and constant traveling. (Indulged him in any tangible way, she'd reflect when she thought of it later. So many of the things she'd wanted to do for him had been canceled by missions, by orders from above.) It was possible that someone else would have been able to do it better, of course, she knew and cared nothing about art...
"Clara," he mocked, the rejoinder sing-song as he realized she was not going to continue speaking. She fleetingly wondered if she heard affection. "Your fair-weather reports have sealed my fate."
She found herself simply staring at after he said it; maybe they had. She couldn't imagine what the home office could be thinking, giving the Rafael she knew to someone fresh from school. Still, it would be true from her reports that she had done very little to motivate him, even once they had gotten to the point where they talked frequently. He rarely fought with her seriously; and while he was no where near tamed, while she had never written that... Maybe someone had presumed.
Either the new agent was going to die a painful death, or they were surely going to damage him more than should be acceptable for work in the process of trying to bend him to their will. She regretted it. Rafael would suffer either way, and even if he killed the new agent she thought she wouldn't blame him. It was like murder to put a rookie with an old vampire unless they were a through loyalist, and Rafael despised everything they stood for with all his considerable passion.
She had thought she had made it very clear, even years ago-- best person to hand him off to would be the type of veteran agent that enjoyed longer, more complicated missions, the type that were slow paced but dangerous, or a particularly high-powered officer that needed a vampire as a specialist advisor as much as a bodyguard. Someone he might open up to, the type of pseudo-cultured man or woman that be able to goad him into ranting about the Florentine state or Louis XIV's theft of Italian opera composers and actually follow.
Once you earned his respect, Rafael was reliable, predictable, and relatively trustworthy. He had made few serious escape attempts over the years, and he'd tried to kill her exactly twice, which for a vampire of his age and temperament reflected quite well on both of them. He was sharp-tongued and intelligent, and she'd reflected many times that he would be wasted on most people in the field, that perhaps he was wasted on her. She appreciated that he spoke as often as he did, but she didn't particularly care to follow most of the content.
His real strengths came from his ability to make others agreeable to his suggestions, his knowledge of old magic, etiquette and history-- and how often would that come up on the type of search and retrival missions most fresh agents were assigned? He was suited for detective work or even political manuvering, and it was stupid not to consider his potential. Of course, the rather rare (vampiric) affinity with fire was a tempting reason to leave him just where he was, she was sure...
"I'm as angry as you are," she said finally, meeting his eyes. "You're right, it's a waste. You've behaved very well--" she say him bristle at the word choice but say nothing-- "And you're paying for it. But the agent will be here very soon, and there are some things we--"
A knock at the door of the meeting room. She glanced to him, and he nodded curtly. They were out of time. She could only look at him for a moment longer and wish him all the best.
--
The vampire was a bit less than average height seen objectively, yet the effect was of a taller man. He was elegant in the way that only someone who has been slender for a very long time could be, every movement smooth and balanced. The dark, closely tailored clothes suited him, tight in all the visually appealing places and worn with the air of someone who had come to care much more about effect than comfort. His hair and eyes were dark, and although the first was rather long and curled, his gaze was quick and sharp.
He was clearly inhuman when seen under the florescent lights. If they discomforted him, he didn't let on for a moment. He did not move forward, nor come around the conference table, but simply stood by his current handler, expression piercing and wary. Who was this, who would remove him from what had become--dare he admit it--a comfortable enough arrangement, this other agent who thought he was so capable?
Florescent lights... He set his expression, ready to meet whoever this young upstart was.
"Come in," Clara called, and Rafael watched her rise from her seat, slight but proud. He wondered what she would have said to him, had they had the time.
[OOC: I don't expect posts this long by any means! But I wrote it out for fun as the entrance post. The character that the story would continue with would probably be the man. The description of the storyline can be found http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?p=36912615#post36912615 ]
Clara didn't consider herself to be a terribly soft woman, blonde-haired petiteness aside. She had worked on the force for many years, broken many fresh vampires to the work and many young agents, too. It was possible to continue to feel human because she believed in the cause, in the neccessity of it. There were so many people in the world who deserved to be safe, and so many threats against them.
But she would at admit that Rafael had been a bit special for her, vampire though he was. He was passionate, expressive, a challenge, and she found she had enjoyed getting to know him in the past three years.
It was easy to tell what he was thinking by the set of his lips and an indistinct feeling in the center of her chest. Different though they were, their bond was deep and old enough for her to know at a glance that he was as afraid as he was angry; afraid or despairing, or some combination-- the first was as often as not tight and hard in his chest, while the second, when she had felt it, ranged from wild hysteria to deep suspicion, and it made it difficult to tell them apart. Whatever it was, it didn't suit him at all. The Rafael she knew was proud and vain and biting, and it pained her to see him like this, no matter how much she'd like to deny it.
"I'm being reassigned. There's nothing I can do about it."
"Go to hell," he snapped back, tone acidic and drawl thick, the rare vulgarity coming out very sincere. His vowels were drawled but his consonants had sharpened after years of mandatory speech lessons. He was understandable now. "See me oh so uninterested in the petty beauracratic excuses. They will stick me with some pathetic, power-mad novice only interested in humilitating dominance displays because I have proved ultimately too obediant to you."
"Rafael..." She wondered if he was really so self-centered that that seemed like the real reason for it to him, or if he was just grasping at straws. His former handler had manhandled him into something like neurosis, and the alternating attitudes of defiance and fear had sometimes made it hard for her to see how far she had to go to convince him to listen.
The ideal vampire, in her training regime, was secure in their submission and obeyed because they understood the benefits. It was difficult to motivate Rafael, even once she'd learned how much he loved music, art of any kind. He'd tried his best to keep it from her, no matter how great his enthusiasm; perhaps because of it, really. He thought she would try to take what glimpses of it he got from him.
In reality, she wished she could have indulged him more often, even if it was difficult to do so with their strange hours and constant traveling. (Indulged him in any tangible way, she'd reflect when she thought of it later. So many of the things she'd wanted to do for him had been canceled by missions, by orders from above.) It was possible that someone else would have been able to do it better, of course, she knew and cared nothing about art...
"Clara," he mocked, the rejoinder sing-song as he realized she was not going to continue speaking. She fleetingly wondered if she heard affection. "Your fair-weather reports have sealed my fate."
She found herself simply staring at after he said it; maybe they had. She couldn't imagine what the home office could be thinking, giving the Rafael she knew to someone fresh from school. Still, it would be true from her reports that she had done very little to motivate him, even once they had gotten to the point where they talked frequently. He rarely fought with her seriously; and while he was no where near tamed, while she had never written that... Maybe someone had presumed.
Either the new agent was going to die a painful death, or they were surely going to damage him more than should be acceptable for work in the process of trying to bend him to their will. She regretted it. Rafael would suffer either way, and even if he killed the new agent she thought she wouldn't blame him. It was like murder to put a rookie with an old vampire unless they were a through loyalist, and Rafael despised everything they stood for with all his considerable passion.
She had thought she had made it very clear, even years ago-- best person to hand him off to would be the type of veteran agent that enjoyed longer, more complicated missions, the type that were slow paced but dangerous, or a particularly high-powered officer that needed a vampire as a specialist advisor as much as a bodyguard. Someone he might open up to, the type of pseudo-cultured man or woman that be able to goad him into ranting about the Florentine state or Louis XIV's theft of Italian opera composers and actually follow.
Once you earned his respect, Rafael was reliable, predictable, and relatively trustworthy. He had made few serious escape attempts over the years, and he'd tried to kill her exactly twice, which for a vampire of his age and temperament reflected quite well on both of them. He was sharp-tongued and intelligent, and she'd reflected many times that he would be wasted on most people in the field, that perhaps he was wasted on her. She appreciated that he spoke as often as he did, but she didn't particularly care to follow most of the content.
His real strengths came from his ability to make others agreeable to his suggestions, his knowledge of old magic, etiquette and history-- and how often would that come up on the type of search and retrival missions most fresh agents were assigned? He was suited for detective work or even political manuvering, and it was stupid not to consider his potential. Of course, the rather rare (vampiric) affinity with fire was a tempting reason to leave him just where he was, she was sure...
"I'm as angry as you are," she said finally, meeting his eyes. "You're right, it's a waste. You've behaved very well--" she say him bristle at the word choice but say nothing-- "And you're paying for it. But the agent will be here very soon, and there are some things we--"
A knock at the door of the meeting room. She glanced to him, and he nodded curtly. They were out of time. She could only look at him for a moment longer and wish him all the best.
--
The vampire was a bit less than average height seen objectively, yet the effect was of a taller man. He was elegant in the way that only someone who has been slender for a very long time could be, every movement smooth and balanced. The dark, closely tailored clothes suited him, tight in all the visually appealing places and worn with the air of someone who had come to care much more about effect than comfort. His hair and eyes were dark, and although the first was rather long and curled, his gaze was quick and sharp.
He was clearly inhuman when seen under the florescent lights. If they discomforted him, he didn't let on for a moment. He did not move forward, nor come around the conference table, but simply stood by his current handler, expression piercing and wary. Who was this, who would remove him from what had become--dare he admit it--a comfortable enough arrangement, this other agent who thought he was so capable?
Florescent lights... He set his expression, ready to meet whoever this young upstart was.
"Come in," Clara called, and Rafael watched her rise from her seat, slight but proud. He wondered what she would have said to him, had they had the time.
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