Old 06-18-2010, 12:16 AM   #154126
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simple kisses
skin yields
to lips soft caress
sometimes not so soft
slowly dragging out time
sometimes not
as timeless slides into fast
and furious
one time quiet
the next tumultuous
simple kisses never are
she asked for a simple kiss
soft lips on his
a timeless caress
fingertips on his skin
her lips sliding along heated flesh
just a simple kiss?
or not?
look into her eyes
she wants more than a simple kiss
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Old 06-18-2010, 12:34 AM   #154127
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she asked for a simple kiss
soft lips on his
a timeless caress
fingertips on his skin
her lips sliding along heated flesh
just a simple kiss?
or not?
look into her eyes
she wants more than a simple kiss


maybe it starts with kiss
no
before that
there has to be a smile
there might be tears
or maybe all of this is wrong
it starts with an illusive feeling
a transient thought
and the smile plants the seeds
and the kiss helps them grow
into desire
but the second kiss
the second kiss
is the memory
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Old 06-18-2010, 12:56 AM   #154128
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maybe it starts with kiss
no
before that
there has to be a smile
there might be tears
or maybe all of this is wrong
it starts with an illusive feeling
a transient thought
and the smile plants the seeds
and the kiss helps them grow
into desire
but the second kiss
the second kiss
is the memory
I'll take the memory and the kiss to bed with me.

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Old 06-18-2010, 01:01 AM   #154129
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I have no clue where things are going when I type. One sentence leads to another. Dialogue flows and gives information to use later. I'm on the laptop but give me a minute and I'll give you an example from the PC.
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Rocky quit his job. He was at the part to think. This goes with what began as a simple story. I thought of the line in blue and liked it. This is what came with it.

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He hadn’t intended to stare. Rocky respected peoples’ privacy, but the proximity of the park benches made it impossible for him not to notice the redhead. Fiery strands tumbled down her back, failing in their attempt at covering the bright orange sweater thrown across her shoulders. Images of another woman, similar red hair, teased his memory, disappearing before slamming into him with the force of a hurricane. Visions of Eileen took him back to that long ago night when they rode the subway train for hours.

“Have you ever gotten such bad news your brain couldn’t comprehend the ramifications?”

The question broke into Rocky’s thoughts, chasing the images away. “Excuse me?”

“I’m dying.”

The blunt statement shocked him. His mouth opened and closed several times before he realized he didn’t know what to say.
I remember when you posted that line before. It's great and I'd love to read a completed story that this is a part of. It's interesting how you leaped the story forward and had him remember that line. Very clever.

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simple kisses
skin yields
to lips soft caress
sometimes not so soft
slowly dragging out time
sometimes not
as timeless slides into fast
and furious
one time quiet
the next tumultuous
simple kisses never are
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she asked for a simple kiss
soft lips on his
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fingertips on his skin
her lips sliding along heated flesh
just a simple kiss?
or not?
look into her eyes
she wants more than a simple kiss
I turn my head for a minute or hour or two and this is what happens!
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Old 06-18-2010, 01:12 AM   #154130
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The rest of us stand back in admiration.

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The rest of us stand back in admiration.

Good Morning, Ladies.
Aww, HP. Such an early morning for you.

Would you like a brandy and go back to sleep, or shall I brew you some coffee and be done with the sleeping?
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Old 06-18-2010, 01:24 AM   #154132
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Aww, HP. Such an early morning for you.

Would you like a brandy and go back to sleep, or shall I brew you some coffee and be done with the sleeping?
I just cracked a beer
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Aww, HP. Such an early morning for you.

Would you like a brandy and go back to sleep, or shall I brew you some coffee and be done with the sleeping?
Ah, Honey, for the time being a nice cup of coffee would be right welcome. It's a touch early for a beer.

Oh heck, I do hate this bloody cough!
A nice glass of "stop this cough" would be more than welcome. And I have not smoked a cig in seven months!
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I just cracked a beer
Please, please, tell us it's not Bud Lite . . .


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Ah, Honey, for the time being a nice cup of coffee would be right welcome. It's a touch early for a beer.

Oh heck, I do hate this bloody cough!
A nice glass of "stop this cough" would be more than welcome. And I have not smoked a cig in seven months!
What did the doc say about the cough? *hunts in bag for British Humor Tool* Look on the bright side, just think how much worse it would be if you hadn't stopped smoking!
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Please, please, tell us it's not Bud Lite . . .


Ice House....

What did the doc say about the cough? *hunts in bag for British Humor Tool* Look on the bright side, just think how much worse it would be if you hadn't stopped smoking!
Ice House....
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Please, please, tell us it's not Bud Lite . . .
Ice House....
I thought you were talking about BEER.


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What did the doc say about the cough? *hunts in bag for British Humor Tool* Look on the bright side, just think how much worse it would be if you hadn't stopped smoking!
How true; I think.
I have this cold (in Summer? - Yes, in bloody JUNE).
and it's driving me crazy.

Care to mop the fevered brow, dear?
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Ice House....
Please whisper that in the future. Like this, maybe.

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I thought you were talking about BEER.
* giggle*


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How true; I think.
I have this cold (in Summer? - Yes, in bloody JUNE).
and it's driving me crazy.

Care to mop the fevered brow, dear?
Aww. C'mon over and join me on Kimmee's couch. Let my put cool you with my healing touch.
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Please whisper that in the future. Like this, maybe.



* giggle*


Aww. C'mon over and join me on Kimmee's couch. Let my put cool you with my healing touch.
Ah - I feel better all ready; it's the healing vibes, you know.
Erm . . . why Kimmee's couch ? (forgive my ignorance)
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Ah - I feel better all ready; it's the healing vibes, you know.
Erm . . . why Kimmee's couch ? (forgive my ignorance)
It's the only one I know of on the Last thread. She's always crawling on it.

I can't keep my eyes open a second longer. Might if I snuggle against you and sleep?
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It's the only one I know of on the Last thread. She's always crawling on it.

I can't keep my eyes open a second longer. Might if I snuggle against you and sleep?
Oh do please. You're more than welcome and I'll try not to keep you awake with coughing (it's easing now). Alternatively, I'll have a word with the Dragon who'll keep you warm and snug under his wing.

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Hi everyone, can i join your group?
Hey, welcome and of course . . .


Hey guys.
Just a quick note from the depths of the night, to say I'll see you all in a couple of days.
Off back out to Waimarama beach for the weekend.
I'm expecting a fair bit of ice out there in the mornings though.
Just hoping I dont get ambushed by Vodka and fall down asleep outside somewhere . . . ooooo

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Hello Lady,
Of course you can join us. But please don't wake Honey; she was up early this morning and is tired, not to say shagged out.

I must remember to thank Kimmee for her couch, sometime.
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Hey, welcome and of course . . .

Hey guys.
Just a quick note from the depths of the night, to say I'll see you all in a couple of days.
Off back out to Waimarama beach for the weekend.
I'm expecting a fair bit of ice out there in the mornings though.
Just hoping I dont get ambushed by Vodka and fall down asleep outside somewhere . . . ooooo
Keep a sample of the Vodka for me please, Ace.
Have a good weekend, mate.
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Morning HP

A beach in the winter. Yeah, Kiwi's are crazy. Have Fun Z.

Coffee is ready for those in need like me.

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So DH has been shagging on kimdear's couch? Naughty!
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good grief! what happened to my couch???




nice one, guys. good morning.
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So DH has been shagging on kimdear's couch? Naughty!
No, Fool, HP was ill, so DH sent him there to rest. Then she felt tired and snuggled up with him. There was no naughtiness; just pure innocence.
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Good morning. It was raining so I went back to sleep. I guess that means it's time to begin my day.
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No, Fool, HP was ill, so DH sent him there to rest. Then she felt tired and snuggled up with him. There was no naughtiness; just pure innocence.
HP was the one who mentioned Shagging in a later post. I'd have to go back to check the context but then again I'm too lazy.

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