skimmyskim
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- Nov 22, 2009
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Here are some things I have been working on, and hopefully you'll enjoy them, and/or give me some constructive feedback.
The first is a hyco:
And the second poem I wrote is this:
The first is a hyco:
Pump
Her hands on my shaft
Smoldering eyes, hush lips, baby
Swiftly up and down
pump
Her hands on my shaft
Smoldering eyes, hush lips, baby
Swiftly up and down
pump
And the second poem I wrote is this:
I romanced her,
Wrapped up in the frigid night
Breathing clouds around the hedges of her
Gleaming hazel eyes
sweat steaming on the cusp of her petite-
We lay, lips locked
On the glowing, crimson sheets
Laid tender by the moons aura.
She lay purring, pink, fingers intertwined
And,
She whispered words ancient,
Primal, into my ears.
She is warm.
"Are you real?" I asked,
As she faded with the exhale of my chest,
Her lingering taste,
Fizzling and dissolving on my tongue.
Wrapped up in the frigid night
Breathing clouds around the hedges of her
Gleaming hazel eyes
sweat steaming on the cusp of her petite-
We lay, lips locked
On the glowing, crimson sheets
Laid tender by the moons aura.
She lay purring, pink, fingers intertwined
And,
She whispered words ancient,
Primal, into my ears.
She is warm.
"Are you real?" I asked,
As she faded with the exhale of my chest,
Her lingering taste,
Fizzling and dissolving on my tongue.