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Old 04-21-2009, 07:41 PM   #51
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Literotica’s All-Time ‘Most Comments Received’ List

THREADMASTERS STATEMENT OF INTENT

I have started this thread for the following reasons: One, to bring to the attention of all LITEROTICANS the most commented on stories in the history of this site in the hopes that new readers will be found for these great stories.

The Second (and more important goal) is to provoke more FEEDBACK for these stories, both on this thread and also directly to the authors themselves via VOTES, E-MAILS and PUBLIC COMMENTS. Please feel free to post your feedback here.

Thirdly I hope the thread will encourage feedback on other stories. Perhaps the #1 complaint of all Literotica authors is the lack of feedback they receive on their stories. The listed stories prove that it is possible to get feedback on this site. Every story listed below has been able to garner the attention and comments from over 100 readers! Before complaining about lack of feedback perhaps our authors should read some of these stories and try to learn how some of the greatest authors have managed to garner feedback.

Finally, I’d like to appeal to our readers directly: please ladies and gentlemen – send us your comments and feedback. Tell us what you thought of our stories (whether good or bad). The only way we can improve is by hearing what you think.


james r scouries

p.s. this list in future will be maintained and administered by my capable assistant, the lovely Gabrielle L. If you wish any information about the list, have any suggestions, or find any errors or omissions on the list please contact her directly.

p.s.s. we’d like to thank miss serena kitt and miss sarahhh for their help in preparing this list. Thanks ladies!




***** UPDATED May 2009 *****


Saturday, May 16,2009
ScouriesWorld Headquarters
Miami Beach, Florida


Hi, it’s Gabby,

By appointment from:

HER MAJESTY QUEEN LAUREL III


ScouriesWorld

presents:


LITEROTICA’S TOP STORIES ALL-TIME
MOST COMMENTS RECEIVED LIST

41 STORIES
100+ COMMENTS

12 CATEGORIES
FIRST TIME
GROUP
HOW TO
HUMOR
INCEST
INTERRACIAL
LESBIAN
LOVING WIVES
MATURE
NONHUMAN
ROMANCE
NON CONSENT

22 AUTHORS


BY YEAR
2000 –
2001 –
2002 – 2
2003 – 1
2004 – 4
2005 – 13
2006 – 9
2007 – 3
2008 – 8
2009 - 1



466 ”Daddy", I Whispered scouries



259 ”Mommy”, I Groaned scouries
206 Nothing Between Us M-Y-Erotica
171 Pound Yon Virgin sarahhh
164 Laura’s Vineyard ronde*
164 Breastfeeding My Brother sarahhh
160 Service TryAnything
152 Zoea DG Hear
149 A Boo-boo for Daddy sarahhh
148 Hunted furrybert

143 A Mother and Her Son rgjohn
142 Daddy, I’m Naked sarahhh
131 All These Years selenakitten
123 The Novice wishfulthinking*
115 My Husband Sucks sarahhh
114 Seven Days Ch. 6 soular
114 A Benign Something jtmalone70
111 Romancing The Ravishing Redhead*** sarahhh
111 Eleanor Rigby: The Aftermath Harddaysknight *
110 Stuffing or Muffing sarahhh

110 Unfaithful Wife Charleybear
110 The Worst Week of My Life ohio
110 To Tempt The Devil Ch.1 ms_girl23*
109 My Virgin Sister samslam
107 How To Play Puck sarahhh
106 Sara’s Panties youbadboy
105 A Bitch in Heat sarahhh
105 Falling Into Darkness Ch 18 Elianna*
105 Commando Caper sarahhh
104 Yesterday Harddaysknight

103 Buy Me for a Naked Pet sarahhh
103 How To F*** Your Daddy sarahhh
102 Eleanoe Rigby Harddaysknight*
102 But Love is Blind Blue88
101 I Love Dick sarahhh
101 Till Dawn 1313
101 Strap-On Sex and the Single Girl sarahhh
101 Leave it to Beaver sarahhh*
100 King Size Bed strickland83

100 Scenes From A Marriage ohio LW*

List updated last week of February 2009
*new addition April, May 2009
*** a story inspired by j. r. scouries



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1313
Blue88
CharleyBear
DGHear
Elianna
Furrybert
Harddaysknight
Jtmalone70
ms_girl23
M-Y-Erotica

Ohio
Rgjohn
ronde

Sarahhh
samslam
Selenakitten

scouries
soular
strickland83
TryAnything

wishfulthinking
youbadboy

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Old 04-22-2009, 01:24 AM   #52
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Why, exactly, is it necessary to note a particular story was inspired by the "great" scouries?
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Old 04-22-2009, 01:37 PM   #53
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Why, exactly, is it necessary to note a particular story was inspired by the "great" scouries?
As I recall, I suggested that to him. You see, I'm very grateful he mused me on the story, which is the proximate cause of 100+ comments I do believe. Oh my, he just mused me on another story.
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Old 04-24-2009, 07:16 AM   #54
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Welcome miss wishfulthinking!!!!


You should have let us know before.
We’re delighted to have you in our midst

You have your own site? Do you have any of the boss’s stories on it?

You have sour grapes?

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Old 04-24-2009, 08:59 AM   #55
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QUOTE wistfulaussis I'm not sure who you mean by boss

I mean the wonderful man I work under, James R Scouries. I wasjust wondering if you have any f his best sellers up on your site.

Like:


cover art by sarahhh

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Old 05-09-2009, 10:31 PM   #56
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new story found...

Hi, it’s Gabby again,

In association with this wonderful site run by

“HER MAJESTY QUEEN LAUREL III and HER CONSORT, MANU the MAGNIFICENT


I’m pleased to announce


* * * MORE REALLY GREAT NEWS * * *


We’ve found another one. The 40th story in the history of LITEROTICA that has received 100 COMMENTS!!

And it comes from a wonderful girl!

soular

for her 2008 story:

Damn Dress: A Love Story Ch. 10


This is Miss soulars second story to hit 100+ comments.

I’d suggest you read this story immediately. Then vote and send the author your comment.

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Old 05-16-2009, 08:21 PM   #57
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more good news...

Hi, it’s Gabby again,

In association with this wonderful site run by

“HER MAJESTY QUEEN LAUREL III and HER CONSORT, MANU the MAGNIFICENT


I’m pleased to announce


* * * MORE REALLY GREAT NEWS * * *


We’ve found another one. The 41st story in the history of LITEROTICA that has received 100 COMMENTS!!

And it comes from a great author:

ohio

for his 2009 Loving Wives story – the first story from 2009 to make the list:

Scenes From A Marriage


This is ohio’s second story to hit 100+ comments.

I’d suggest you read this story immediately. Then vote and send the author your comment.

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Old 06-05-2009, 07:04 PM   #58
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Hi, it's Gabby again,

I know it's been awhile...

The boss is still away (he may be down in the Amazonian rainforest for another two weeks) but I couldn't wait to highlight this great achievment.

Daddy I Whispered, LITEROTICA'S greatest story, reveived it's 500th comment last week. This singular achievment simply highlights the boss's ability to connect with the literotic reader.

Well done boss!!!!

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Old 06-15-2009, 11:16 AM   #59
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Hi, it's Gabby

Have you read one of these great 100+ COMMENT STORIES lately? If not, why not? I have.

Remember, FEEDBACK is important to our most famous authors...

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Old 06-23-2009, 10:36 AM   #60
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Come on you guys - sit down and read one of these great stories and leave a comment!

Try one of the sarahhhian masterpieces for example.

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Old 07-10-2009, 04:12 PM   #61
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Hi, it’s Gabby again,

In association with this wonderful site run by

“HER MAJESTY QUEEN LAUREL III and HER CONSORT, MANU the MAGNIFICENT


I’m pleased to announce


* * * MORE REALLY GREAT NEWS * * *


We’ve found another one. The 42nd story in the history of LITEROTICA that has received 100 COMMENTS!!

And it comes from a wonderful girl! None other than the fabulous:

sarahhh

for her Nude Day contest entry:

Nude Awakening


I’d suggest you read this story immediately. Then vote and send the author your comment. She's the best authoress on the site!

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Old 07-24-2009, 11:02 AM   #62
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We are looking for new 100 comments stories - I will be updating the list in early August. Please advise if you come across any.

Jim will be back in mid August (one more week in the jungle then two weeks recuperating in Rio - I dont know why he cant recupe with me in Miami!)

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Old 08-05-2009, 10:36 AM   #63
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The update is NOT finisghed yet but you might be interested to know that the number 1 story, the magnificent "Daddy", I Whispered, now has 564 comments.

Well done boss...

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The update is STILL NOT (sorry about that) finished yet but you might be interested to know that the number 2 story, the magnificent -Oh Mommy-, now has 297 comments.

Well done boss...

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Old 08-28-2009, 10:07 AM   #65
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Home of:


NOW NUMBER 11


cover art by sarahhh

And so many other wonderful best sellers

Why not read one today and send us your feedback?

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Old 09-12-2009, 02:36 PM   #66
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she's done it again!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hi, it’s Gabby again,

In association with this wonderful site run by

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I’m pleased to announce


* * * MORE REALLY GREAT NEWS * * *


We’ve found another one. The 43nd story in the history of LITEROTICA that has received 100 COMMENTS!!

And it comes from who else:

sarahhh

for her latest contest entry –

Hooters On Scooters


Like how many times has LITEROTICA’S second greatest living author done it now? She’s too good…..

I just hope she’ll post the cover for this great story here…(her artwork is almost as good as her writing).

I’d suggest you read this story immediately. Then vote and send the author your comment.

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Old 09-21-2009, 11:15 AM   #67
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Hi, it’s Gabby again!

In association with this wonderful site run by

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I’m pleased to announce


* * * MORE REALLY GREAT NEWS * * *



We found another new member! Our twenty third so honored. And the story, a LOVING WIVES one, is our 44th story to achieve 100+ comments.

The Middle Case


We welcome this wonderful writer into our miidst:

cloacas

I invite you to read not only this story but all the other stories this man has provided the site and all of us. And send him your comments!

Welcome sir!

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Old 09-25-2009, 03:40 PM   #68
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ATTENTION CLUBMEMBERS!!!!


UPDATE COMING NOVEMBER 1ST

A new updated list will be issued in the next week or so. If you want your stories figures reported accurately please send them to me asap.

Gabby

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Old 09-25-2009, 04:10 PM   #69
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Hi, it’s Gabby again,

In association with this wonderful site run by

“HER MAJESTY QUEEN LAUREL III and HER CONSORT, MANU the MAGNIFICENT


I’m pleased to announce


* * * MORE REALLY GREAT NEWS * * *


We’ve found another one. The 43nd story in the history of LITEROTICA that has received 100 COMMENTS!!

And it comes from who else:

sarahhh

for her latest contest entry –

Hooters On Scooters


Like how many times has LITEROTICA’S second greatest living author done it now? She’s too good…..

I just hope she’ll post the cover for this great story here…(her artwork is almost as good as her writing).

I’d suggest you read this story immediately. Then vote and send the author your comment.

Gabriella L.
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Thanks!

Dang, I couldn't get to 100 on my other Summer Lovin' Contest story though. Only 69. But I like that number. Reminds me of you.

andfor you (both places)
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As many of you know I’ve been away for the last five months. Escorting my sister and niece through the Amazon jungle. Which was sorta interesting except for the piranhas and snakes and poisonous frogs… and the weird natives…

Anyway I’m back now and trying to catch up. Today I clicked open “Daddy”, I Whispered to check the comments that had been made in my abcense. I was surprised to find sixty new ones!

I’d like to thank each and every one of you who took the time to let me know what you thought of my story. Whether you loved it or hated it doesn’t matter that much, it’s the fact that the story moved you enough to prompt your public comments that move me.

THANK YOU.

For those of you you haven’t visited the story lately here’s a few of the latest – I’ll post more of them here and on the famous SCOURIES thread in the coming days…

jim


Total user comments so far: 552

incest is good but babies made from incest are not
10/01/09 by Anonymous in canada
yeah incest is great and all but having babies with your kids thats going too far i mean when you have your daddies baby your most likely going to have a deformed child its not healthy do these people even think of the health problems their kids are going to suffer just becuz the girl didnt take birth control or she got some stupid idea oh daddy make me pregnant your kid is going to be fucked becuz you gave it messed up dna These are all health facts.... i dont say you shouldnt fuck your kids but if you do make sure you arent going have babies that is wrong for their health
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hitting home...
10/01/09 by Anonymous in USA
reading the story hit home with me and my only daughter of 13 at that time ..it was as if it was being written as a story of our life..so simlar of our situation ...
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loved it!
10/01/09 by Anonymous in bangladesh
wow..what a story!it gave me butterfly feelings in my stomach...it was more than an erotic story..a love story.it surely showed a pure love and sexual desire between a father and a daughter and the ending was most pleasant,maybe it is forbidden though,but still it has a big pleasure,a success...wish to have stories like these,full with passion,more from u,please!keep writing.!!
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A Magical Experience
09/27/09 by Anonymous
You are a wonderful story teller, a sorceress with words. What a delicious torment the little girl was for her father, from the moment she learned of her true feelings for him. He didn't stand a chance!
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Best Father daughther
09/22/09 by Anonymous in USA
This is the best Father Daughter I have ever read
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You have a magical way with words
09/18/09 by mathiasg16 in Los Angeles, California
I have read a bunch of your stories & even marked you as one of my favorite authors, but this story took the cake... bought the farm... and has the Midas touch!!! The writing was amazing, the dialogue felt like it was real, and the eroticness of the whole story was, on a scale of 1 - 10, somewhere in the triple digits!!! After reading this story (not to mention all your others... sorry for not commenting earlier) I am DEFINITELY a fan for life!!! ~Mathias
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Some people can't read
09/18/09 by Anonymous in Brooklyn NY
The people who made comments that the blonde was an air head because of her Arab comments missed a major point. She was saying those things off the top of her head in jest. She never went to sleep and didn’t actually have a dream but she was making that up as she went so she didn’t have to say daddy I came to bed naked to feel you naked. She was only pretending to act as a child to not talk about the sex she was there for.
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OFF THA CHAIN
09/17/09 by Anonymous in AMERICA
I FUCKING LOVED IT AND I HOPE THAT U KEEP WRITING THESE WONDERFUL STORIES AND BLESSING ME
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Love my daughter
09/03/09 by Anonymous in usa
I loved your story it was awsome.I have lunch this week with my oldest daughter who is 24.And I plan to finish what we started on her 18th birthday.I only ate her that day but after reading your story its time to finish.
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Ignorant
09/02/09 by What_now22
You know nothing about Arabs and killed this entire story by your nasty racial comment in it. Arabs do not go around raping people you need to learn to get your facts straight. Your ignorant and really believe Arabs hate Americans . You probably believe they're all terrorists too. Your writing about incest and you think you have the right to write a comment like that? You disgust me.
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Incredible
09/01/09 by Anonymous in USA
Wow, admittedly the innocent bit was played up a bit too much but I didn't really mind as I read it. Amazing story, well told, nice ending.
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wow:.....it was good
08/30/09 by Anonymous in Singapore
if i want to write, i can't for sure be even a speckle close to ur work. Congratulations. Please write , and u can contact me .... all_mits@yahoo.com.my
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AMAZING
08/27/09 by Anonymous in mansfield UK
Best thing i ever read ever! It made me really horny because i fancy a girl called stephanie and she is really fit! if you could give a score of 200 i honestly would. fantastic read
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Here’s a few more…

I’ll also post some others on the famous SCOURIES thread…

Thanks again dear readers, and have a great weekend,

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Total user comments so far: 552


Delicious
07/14/09 by Anonymous in USA
Loved it wonderful build to the climax!!!!
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Nice Story, but...
07/12/09 by Anonymous in Caribbean
As much as I enjoyed the story, I almost didn't bother reading past the first page. Your comments about Arabs was uncalled for and quite frankly, stupid. The fact that you portrayed this character as a good looking, healthy, smart, happy, blond American, who happens to be CHRISTIAN!!? seems beyond me, considering the type of story you're telling here. Yes, most stories on this site are fiction/fantasy, but I think you need to base yourself in reality.
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Fantastic
07/12/09 by Anonymous in australia
I am a young girl just starting with puberty and I am learning about sex,sexaual tension,love and I think If thta were real I would put a vote towards I think that u should be able to love whomever u want be it ur father or anyone
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Fuck u hater
07/11/09 by Anonymous
wat the fuck do u hav against us arabs u fucking bitch we are no diferent than any1 else in the world
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Fantastic!
07/11/09 by Anonymous in USA
This story is unlike any other! The description and length of this story is just fantastic. I usually am not into the "Family" type of stories, but you've basically changed my views! -Looking forward to more stories from you 'Scouries!'
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Fabulous
05/24/09 by Anonymous in USA
You worked "the device" to perfection. By "the device," I mean the sexual tension created when both persons desperately want sex, but one of them is trying to resist. When this device is deployed as well as you did in this story, the erotic effect is stupendous.
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too slow
05/20/09 by Anonymous in USA
There was only one page of hot stuff. All the other stuff was boring..... I actually skipped 2-3 pages. I've seen better.
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Get over yourself.
05/19/09 by Anonymous in Realityville, USA
For being the self proclaimed "Literotica's #1 Author," you're giving the rest of us authors a bad rap. Get off your high horse and get an editor. Your ego will recover in due time. Typical and boring, went on too long, suspense didn't work out for you in this one. It wasn't the story that got all these people to bust a nut, it was the incest.
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Wow
05/15/09 by Anonymous in USA
Loved it
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wow!
05/15/09 by Anonymous in canada
very nice, super hot, amazing writing!! 5 stars!
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loved it
05/14/09 by Anonymous in usa
good for the two of you.I just wich i had someone like you
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LOVED THE STORY
05/14/09 by Anonymous in USA
HOTTER THAN HOT. I COULD NOT STOP READING!
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Old 10-04-2009, 11:22 AM   #72
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Here’s the last set for now.

I’ll be posting the “Ohhh Mommy” ones soon…

Thanks again dear readers, and have a great Sunday,

jim

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Too Hotttttt
06/09/09 by Anonymous in United States
It should have a score of ten! I'm 48 and dreamed of this with my eldest daughter. Partway through part 1, I had to release my cock from my jeans! I don't know how I made it to the end of part 3 without squirting cum all over! Fast then slow and the wet, slippery, precum lubed my cock like never before! This story reading is new to me, I'll be back!
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No story, couldn't even get excited.
06/08/09 by Anonymous in USA
I hate to leave a bad comment, I really do. I'm not going to tell you the story was horrible, you're obviously a gifted writer, as apparently I am as well because I too write on this site and rarely get below a 100% on every comment. I am leaving my name out though for the sole reason that I don't post comments under my writing name. With that said, I think your story would be SO much better with less sexual talk and more of an actual story. Plus your main character Stephanie talks like a child which makes the story ridiculously unbelievable. Again, I'm sorry to be harsh, I really do intend to just give advice. While some people love your story, I guess they are also the same people who can get off simply by watching meaningless porn. There are other's like myself who need an actual believable story to get any kind of excitement from it. This was not one of those stories, as I couldn't even get a tingle. I hope you write another story that doesn't have the father and daughter together in bed naked in the first few paragraphs. No build up.
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uh!
06/05/09 by Anonymous in Paris
all the morals seem wrong, but what can i say?!?!??? truly amazing!!
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FANTABULOUS
06/04/09 by Anonymous in India
ITS AN AMAZING STORY. REALLY LOVED THE WAY U BUILT IT UP TO THE HARDCORE CORE OF THE STORY. THANKS.
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Wish I Could
05/28/09 by Anonymous in USA
I totally LOVED ur story! This is one of the best ones I have read. Just the Desription got me to orgasm. I wish I Had some one like him to fuck. Live a happy life with him and keep on making those stories.
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05/27/09 by Anonymous in USA
I think the story was very good. I hate it when all the story is just "the hot stuff" as one person put it. It needs some STORY to it. BUT, i do think you are too full of yourself. There are other great authors on here, some of which I enjoyed more than yours. You ARE good, there is no doubt about that. But your editor's notes almost ruin the enjoyment for me. Without the editor's notes I would give you a 75, but your cockiness ruined it for me. Sorry!
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1 to 5?? I give it a 6
05/26/09 by Anonymous in USA
Better than all the other stories I have read
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Old 10-19-2009, 11:09 PM   #73
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Hi, it’s Gabby again,

In association with this wonderful site run by

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I’m pleased to announce


* * * MORE REALLY GREAT NEWS * * *


We’ve found another one. The 45nd story in the history of LITEROTICA that has received 100 COMMENTS!!

And it comes from who else:

sarahhh

for her latest Halloween contest entry –

Sorority Suck You Bus


Like how many times has LITEROTICA’S second greatest living author done it now? She’s too good…..

I just hope she’ll post the cover for this great story here…(her artwork is almost as good as her writing).

I’d suggest you read this story immediately. Then vote and send the author your comment.

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Old 10-22-2009, 09:03 PM   #74
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Hi, it’s Gabby again,

In association with this wonderful site run by

“HER MAJESTY QUEEN LAUREL III and HER CONSORT, MANU the MAGNIFICENT


I’m pleased to announce


* * * MORE REALLY GREAT NEWS * * *


We’ve found another one. The 45nd story in the history of LITEROTICA that has received 100 COMMENTS!!

And it comes from who else:

sarahhh

for her latest Halloween contest entry –

Sorority Suck You Bus


Like how many times has LITEROTICA’S second greatest living author done it now? She’s too good…..

I just hope she’ll post the cover for this great story here…(her artwork is almost as good as her writing).

I’d suggest you read this story immediately. Then vote and send the author your comment.

Gabriella L.
Club Sectretary, “1000+ COMMENT CLUB”
You are just too sweet, Gabby!

Hey, I just noticed another story that should go on the list. I happened to go to Feedback Portal to see if Jim's Halloween Contest epic "Eve's Halloween Daddy (and Mommy?)" had any more entertaining comments, and I saw 100 comments on "The Redhead," a Loving Wives story by crisscross 2037. So I put comment 101 on it informing her of this thread. She has another story "Totally Unacceptable Behavior" that is right up there with Jim's for most comments in the last 24 hours.
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Old 10-22-2009, 09:37 PM   #75
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thank you for the news sarahhh . And thanks for the comment on Jim's latest. You're the best!

And I promise you that we're using all the resources of ScouriesWorld to find your missing W.

Hi, it’s Gabby again!

In association with this wonderful site run by

“HER MAJESTY QUEEN LAUREL III and HER CONSORT, MANU the MAGNIFICENT


I’m pleased to announce


* * * MORE REALLY GREAT NEWS * * *



We found another new member! Our twenty fourth so honored. And the story, a LOVING WIVES one, is our 46th story to achieve 100+ comments.

The Redhead


We welcome this wonderful writer into our midst:

crisscross2037

I invite you to read not only this story but all the other stories this author has provided the site and all of us. And please send your comments!

Welcome!

Gabrielle L.
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