First Kiss

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Do you remember your first kiss?

This morning I was feeling lonely and at these times I think of my wife. I entered her art studio and like always I marvel at the beauty she created with her paints.

In the center of the room is an easel and on it is an unfinish work. She had told me that she was going to name the painting, First Kiss. She never finished it cause she got to sick. Yet I look at it as her masterpiece.

Though the work is unfinished I know it is of us. There is a small pixie of a girl with hair as dark as midnight and her eyes are of china blue. The boy is a tall lanky youth with curly blonde hair like a girl. Though his face is not completed I know it is me cause she captured the foolish awkardness I always had. The small girl has the boy by both his ears and her face is upturned with her lips puckered for a kiss.

Though that was many years ago I can close my eyes and remember that day as if it just occured. Lizzy and I were standing on a boatdock on the lake at a church picnick on a Sunday morning. I was twelve years old and Lizzy was fourteen.

Lizzy asked me who I thought was the prettiest girl I know. Being a stupid boy I did not realize where her question was leading. I replied that I thought Miss Lease was the prettiest girl I ever saw. She was my school teacher who I had a boyhood crush on.

This answer did not go over to well and Lizzy pushed me off the dock. She stood there laughing untill I came out of the water and chased her. I caught her easily and I was going to give a knuckle rub on her head.

Somehow she twisted in my arms and grabbed both my ears. She looked me in the eyes and said, Franklin I love you and someday I will marry you. She then pulled my head down and kissed me.

What I recall most was the softness of her lips and the smell of her hair. I remember the teasing I got because she kissed me in front of everybody from the church.

Eight years later I was a young man of twenty. I stood beside Lizzy and gave my oath of fidelity and devotion before those same people in our church. They remembered the day Lizzy kissed me and told the world she would marry me someday.

Everyday for twenty years untill her death she kissed me. There was never a time that a single kiss from that beautiful women could not curl my toes and make my heart soar with love and lust for her. Even so, my mind cannot but wonder back to that Sunday morning when I was but a boy of twelve and I recieved my first kiss.


I do opologize for being so windy. I did not intend to be.

Do you remember your first kiss and do you have fond memories of it?
 
I am saving myself for marriage...

its the best gift I can give my future partner.
 
Ok, after I wipe my eyes from reading your story....


I remember, it was a quick tongue kiss before getting on the bus in 7th grade

Nothing exciting
 
Emerald Eyed said:
Ok, after I wipe my eyes from reading your story....


I remember, it was a quick tongue kiss before getting on the bus in 7th grade

Nothing exciting


:rolleyes:
 
Redneck_Cowboy said:
Do you remember your first kiss?

This morning I was feeling lonely and at these times I think of my wife. I entered her art studio and like always I marvel at the beauty she created with her paints.

In the center of the room is an easel and on it is an unfinish work. She had told me that she was going to name the painting, First Kiss. She never finished it cause she got to sick. Yet I look at it as her masterpiece.

Though the work is unfinished I know it is of us. There is a small pixie of a girl with hair as dark as midnight and her eyes are of china blue. The boy is a tall lanky youth with curly blonde hair like a girl. Though his face is not completed I know it is me cause she captured the foolish awkardness I always had. The small girl has the boy by both his ears and her face is upturned with her lips puckered for a kiss.

Though that was many years ago I can close my eyes and remember that day as if it just occured. Lizzy and I were standing on a boatdock on the lake at a church picnick on a Sunday morning. I was twelve years old and Lizzy was fourteen.

Lizzy asked me who I thought was the prettiest girl I know. Being a stupid boy I did not realize where her question was leading. I replied that I thought Miss Lease was the prettiest girl I ever saw. She was my school teacher who I had a boyhood crush on.

This answer did not go over to well and Lizzy pushed me off the dock. She stood there laughing untill I came out of the water and chased her. I caught her easily and I was going to give a knuckle rub on her head.

Somehow she twisted in my arms and grabbed both my ears. She looked me in the eyes and said, Franklin I love you and someday I will marry you. She then pulled my head down and kissed me.

What I recall most was the softness of her lips and the smell of her hair. I remember the teasing I got because she kissed me in front of everybody from the church.

Eight years later I was a young man of twenty. I stood beside Lizzy and gave my oath of fidelity and devotion before those same people in our church. They remembered the day Lizzy kissed me and told the world she would marry me someday.

Everyday for twenty years untill her death she kissed me. There was never a time that a single kiss from that beautiful women could not curl my toes and make my heart soar with love and lust for her. Even so, my mind cannot but wonder back to that Sunday morning when I was but a boy of twelve and I recieved my first kiss.


I do opologize for being so windy. I did not intend to be.

Do you remember your first kiss and do you have fond memories of it?


You are incredibly lucky to have known such love. I am very sorry for your loss. :rose: :rose:
 
my first kiss was at a concert,
i was thirteen or fourteen
it was really exciting in the loud music and all the people
we were dreanched in sweat and pressed real close
but the music and people seemed to disappear as our lips met :heart: :heart:


i'm so sorry for your loss, memories by themselves can be lovely though
 
I remember my first kiss...it was rather chaste.

I also remember that kiss when it dawned on me that I was in love with him.

Your post actually brought tears to my eyes. To love and have had something so dear makes you one lucky man, but also it saddens me to know you've lost it too.

:rose:
 
*sniffs and wipes away tears*.... what a beautiful story to honor the memory of your wife.

my first kiss wasn't that memorable...I think I was 13 or so and it was at summer VBS.
 
My first chaste, small kiss was nothing but silly. No romance. I went and washed my face and lips afterward, embarassed, disgusted, and aroused by the whole experience. I hadn't really wanted it.

My first "make out" kiss was awkward - of course it would be, it's me. In my family room, late at night with a boy, and some documentary on some history thing on in the background. I was surprised that "that was all" and there wasn't much more to it - and I started laughing part way through, when I could hear the droning of some professor on tv. And, in about two seconds, his hands were on my tits, and I remember being extra surprised that that seemed even less of a big deal.

Each time, each new experience, I go and stand in front of the mirror for a while, and I look at myself - expecting something to be different, expecting everyone to be able to look at me and know. Thats never the case. I'm still surprised by that.
 
you always write such great stories. :)

I remember mine, but wasn't quite ready for it.
 
So many posts that capture my thoughts. Twenty years with someone you love that much is a blink of an eye. But a treasure to savor forever.

I hope that you will be able to move forward and find another love someday, someone different, but just as wonderful.
 
...in one of those mall parking lot carnivals, in a ride through the fun house, when I didn't have the nerve to do it the entire way through, she finally just grabbed me and kissed me just before we re-emerged back into the twilight...

I had been in love with her for a year... but it was only 7th grade.
 
My first kiss was long slow and tasted like strawberry Kool Aid.


I was 10 or 11 years old.

He was a year younger then I was
 
Image said:
That was so wonderful a post...


I knew that you'd come around. He's quite special, isn't he?


As far as my first kiss, I remember it was funny as hell.

I was still a tomboy, and boys were more for pals than kisses. I got dragged along to go iceskating with my sister, who was meeting a date at the pond. He brought a friend for me. I was annoyed when this tall guy grabbed my hand and started pulling me around in circles. Then when he pulled me up and planted a kiss on my lips, I almost CROAKED! I stormed off the ice and went to sit in the car with my father ... the boy followed me and kept knocking on the window.

My father said (holding back a laugh), "I think that young man wants to talk to you." I looked at Daddy and said, "Tell him to GO AWAY!" My father asked, "Why? What happened?" and I said "HE KISSED ME!" Now, my father is roaring in laughter. He kept urging me to go back out, but I didn't want to hear it. He just shrugged at the guy who eventually left. It was much safer cuddled up with Daddy anyhow.
 
Everytime I see this thread Tim McGraw's A Heart Don't Forget Something Like That pops into my head.
 
I thankyou all for your kind words. It took me 3 hours to write this. I had to change my words around so I did not look so much like the country bumpkin that I am.

Maybe someday I will be able to write like that Byron fella though I very much doubt it.
 
Sorry man

Friend, this big ol scary Dom, ex ranger and all round macho man is crying like a baby after your post. I am so so sorry for your loss
 
Redneck_Cowboy said:
I thankyou all for your kind words. It took me 3 hours to write this. I had to change my words around so I did not look so much like the country bumpkin that I am.

Maybe someday I will be able to write like that Byron fella though I very much doubt it.
You are not a country bumpkin by any stretch of the imagination. Some of us are citified, some of us are not. And you live a life some people at Lit would kill for. You have attitudes and beliefs that were born from living where you live.

You did a beautiful job.
 
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