joelafayette
Literotica Guru
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Well first off, someone correct me if I am wrong, since I have testicles and would be the last to know for certain... But I'm fairly sure that this is not anywhere near how women actually talk or think.
I was told by a very wise and very sucessful author many years ago that the key to writing fiction of any genre is to write about what you know!Wow, brutally honest feedback. Hard to hear for sure, but it's exactly what I needed. This will definitely help my future writing. I know this represents big chunk of time for you guys to give me this detailed quality feedback, so I thank you sincerely.
If anyone else wants to add input, the more the better. So far each reviewer has said something slightly different that will help me.
I really admire your courage in inviting criticism of your writing. I read all three chapters, so here goes my advice to you as a writer:Wow, brutally honest feedback. Hard to hear for sure, but it's exactly what I needed. This will definitely help my future writing. I know this represents big chunk of time for you guys to give me this detailed quality feedback, so I thank you sincerely.
If anyone else wants to add input, the more the better. So far each reviewer has said something slightly different that will help me.