RhymeFairy
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neonurotic said:You know you've posted too many poems when you submit the same poem twice, but under different titles.
Goes and stands in Dunce corner ~
Goes and stands in Dunce corner ~
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I can't understand!
As the day and the night collides, and structures sihlouette the tired sight.
I kinda get the feeling someone wants to buy it all. The mind knows nothing of what you speak, it only gives what you need to survive. And as survival parameters are always changing, so then, shall you.
As the day and the night collides, and structures sihlouette the tired sight.
I kinda get the feeling someone wants to buy it all. The mind knows nothing of what you speak, it only gives what you need to survive. And as survival parameters are always changing, so then, shall you.
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Where's Leon?
I've been reading his archive thread for awhile and now no new old poems. I've rather enjoyed looking at the old stuff.
I've been reading his archive thread for awhile and now no new old poems. I've rather enjoyed looking at the old stuff.
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Bibbity, bobbity, blurt.
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neonurotic said:Where's Leon?
I've been reading his archive thread for awhile and now no new old poems. I've rather enjoyed looking at the old stuff.
maybe he's taking a WELL EARNED rest? i hope it's nothing more than that.
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neonurotic said:
Damn, wish I'd come and read that before I posted my two latest. And to think, he's known this all along.
Ah well, better late than never.
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wildsweetone said:
is Leon MIA? . . . he sure has earned some down time.
hey, Leon . . . pssssssssssst.
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I miss M. LeBroz.TheRainMan said:
I hope all is well in his world, and if he's on vacation, I really hope he's having the time of his life. Be safe and happy, Leon.
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Is it healthy to go back to old poems and edit them, or is it more picking them over like a vulture?
I guess the answer is if the poem is improved then it's good.
I guess the answer is if the poem is improved then it's good.
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I think it is very healthy, in the moment you are writing the poem, you can be very infatuated with it, because you are still in the honeymoon phase, like a newborn baby. Who scolds a newborn baby? Thinks of it as anything besides perfect.
When you come back to it, you have changed, grown, and can approach it with the touch of a firm parent of a toddler who needs to wipe his nose and catch his cough, you know, put away the blocks.
I don't know if this stretched and warped metaphor works at all. But I think it is a great idea to come back and rework old poems with new eyes.
When you come back to it, you have changed, grown, and can approach it with the touch of a firm parent of a toddler who needs to wipe his nose and catch his cough, you know, put away the blocks.
I don't know if this stretched and warped metaphor works at all.
But I think it is a great idea to come back and rework old poems with new eyes.neonurotic said:
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The heart or the page?
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I feel a poem coming on...........The Heart On The Page......
good to see you, dear one.
good to see you, dear one.
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Tzara said:Bring on that poem, darlin'.
For some reason I've lost the thread.
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We had a same title challenge, Word Drops... remember?neonurotic said:I'm never infatuated with my poetry. I go back and cringe then fix my fuck-ups, aka: misspells and word drops. I'm famous for word drops. Anyone that instant messages with me knows to fill in my blanks.
If it's only words you drop, your IM correspondents must be terribly disappointed! 
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..............................................Look!Tristesse2 said:For some reason I've lost the thread.
Here is a short thread of twisted cotton.
I pull at it. It is a habit I have.
As the thread unravels, I wonder—
what secrets will be revealed?
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Hey! That was my favourite sweater!
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neonurotic said:
Poetry Feedback & Discussion (104 Viewing)
it's climbing.
Paris Hilton musta walked in . . .
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I think it must have been a group of Japanese tourists. Two days ago they were in the Portuguese forum. At one point, there were 27 people viewing, which is probably more than the total number of posters since the forum was created.
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