WickedEve
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Re: Is there an echo in this thread, SP?
Lauren had a box
it was a surprise
she opened it wide
and shocked my eyes
out oozed pus
strangely erotic
and ewwww
grossly exotic
See! You shouldn't use pus in a poem! lol
Angeline thinks pus is gross! See, I'm not the only pus hater.Angeline said:you're kinda repetative. lol.
And lauren much as I adore you, pus--no matter how multiwhatever it is--is just gross. And come to think of it, multi pus is mega gross (sorry for the valley girl-type speak--I spend too much time around adolescents).
Lauren had a box
it was a surprise
she opened it wide
and shocked my eyes
out oozed pus
strangely erotic
and ewwww
grossly exotic
See! You shouldn't use pus in a poem! lol