ThePhoenixMan
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Mac DiOrenzio, or Big Mac, as he was commonly known, had become quite impatient, and was now standing outside an extravagant home, with three of his associates. Carmine, Vito, and Vinnie, each, stood at least six foot six, and had the figure of professional football players. All the men were dressed in impeccable Armani suits, donning dark sunglasses. Mac was slightly shorter at six foot three, but with a slightly less than perfect athletic figure. His salt and peppered hair showed his age, while each of his associates had their long hair slicked back into tight, neat ponytails.
Mac pressed the ball of his cane to the doorbell waiting for the occupants to answer. Mac didn't have a limp, or a bad knee; the cane was simply something Mac always carried with him. The answer at the door was not quick enough to Mac's liking so he pressed the bell again. That's when he heard a young female on the other side of the door, screaming at her husband, "Why can't you tear yourself away from that basketball game long enough to answer the damn door?"
The door flung open, and Mac's eyes settled upon a beautiful young lady, whose initial reaction was frustration, but quickly tried to compose herself in front of the well dressed visitors. He liked the way she ran her hands through her long sandy blonde hairs, pulling them away from her flawless young face, still trying to make herself presentable. She continued with the quick makeover, smoothing out the wrinkles in her blouse, her hands running over a set of deliciously large breasts that looked firm and round.
Mac knew her, but she didn't know him, and when she asked what the men wanted, Mac approached, towering over her five foot four inch frame. "We're here to see Mitch, he's expecting us."
Brenda had no reason not to be polite with the visitors who seemed to know her husband of only six months. She surely didn't know all his friends, nor his business associates from the architectural firm he worked at. On several occasions, they had entertained prospects at the house, but Mitch hadn't told her of any visitors planned for today! "Sure, come on in," she politely offered stepping aside so the four men could join her in the large foyer of the spacious home. Mac could tell that this lovely wife worked dutifully to keep the house well maintained and nicely decorated. "Just wait right here, and I'll go get him," Brenda stated as she turned and left the foyer.
Mac, along with his associates, followed the woman, despite her request they stay in the foyer. She was oblivious to that, as she stepped into the archway of the living room where Mitch was screaming at the television, obviously upset that his favorite team was losing. "Mitch? Um you have some com ..."
Mac watched as Mitch raised his head, all the color quickly leaving his face. The movement of Vito and Vinnie pushing by Brenda cut off her announcement of the guests. The two large brutes each grabbed Mitch by an arm and easily lifted him out of the seat as Carmine approached, pulling a black leather glove over his right hand. Carmine then quickly landed three brutal punches to Mitch's stomach, causing him to double over in pain. A small trickle of blood seeped from his mouth as he coughed.
Mac looked on, shutting out the shrill cries of the woman in front of him, pleading for the men to stop. When they didn't she ran towards the phone, threatening to call the cops. Carmine stopped beating Mitch long enough to spin around and slap her roughly across the face, sending her slumping into another chair. The stinging red blow was evidenced on her cheek as Carmine barked, "SHUT UP BITCH! YOU AIN'T DOIN NOTHIN' 'LESS WE SAY SO"
Carmine wove his black gloved hand into her hair and fisted it, twisting his fist as he pulled her back into the seat. Mitch tried in vain to come to her rescue, but another punch to the gut by Vinnie ended that attempt.
Mac then entered the room, leaning on his cane as he took each careful step, now assured that everyone would be calmed by their presence.
"Mitch, Mitch, Mitch! How long did you think you could avoid us? I warned you, that if you didn't pay, that I would come to collect! You've been dodging me for several weeks now Mitch! How long did you think I'd go without collecting my hundred thousand dollars?"
Mac walked over to a glass table where he picked up a photo frame of Mitch and Brenda on their wedding day. He looked at it briefly before placing it carefully back on the table. Then abruptly, while shaking his head, he slammed the handle of his cane into the table, shattering it and breaking the glass on the precious frame.
"We had a deal Mitch! The money or your wife! Which is it?"
Mac DiOrenzio, or Big Mac, as he was commonly known, had become quite impatient, and was now standing outside an extravagant home, with three of his associates. Carmine, Vito, and Vinnie, each, stood at least six foot six, and had the figure of professional football players. All the men were dressed in impeccable Armani suits, donning dark sunglasses. Mac was slightly shorter at six foot three, but with a slightly less than perfect athletic figure. His salt and peppered hair showed his age, while each of his associates had their long hair slicked back into tight, neat ponytails.
Mac pressed the ball of his cane to the doorbell waiting for the occupants to answer. Mac didn't have a limp, or a bad knee; the cane was simply something Mac always carried with him. The answer at the door was not quick enough to Mac's liking so he pressed the bell again. That's when he heard a young female on the other side of the door, screaming at her husband, "Why can't you tear yourself away from that basketball game long enough to answer the damn door?"
The door flung open, and Mac's eyes settled upon a beautiful young lady, whose initial reaction was frustration, but quickly tried to compose herself in front of the well dressed visitors. He liked the way she ran her hands through her long sandy blonde hairs, pulling them away from her flawless young face, still trying to make herself presentable. She continued with the quick makeover, smoothing out the wrinkles in her blouse, her hands running over a set of deliciously large breasts that looked firm and round.
Mac knew her, but she didn't know him, and when she asked what the men wanted, Mac approached, towering over her five foot four inch frame. "We're here to see Mitch, he's expecting us."
Brenda had no reason not to be polite with the visitors who seemed to know her husband of only six months. She surely didn't know all his friends, nor his business associates from the architectural firm he worked at. On several occasions, they had entertained prospects at the house, but Mitch hadn't told her of any visitors planned for today! "Sure, come on in," she politely offered stepping aside so the four men could join her in the large foyer of the spacious home. Mac could tell that this lovely wife worked dutifully to keep the house well maintained and nicely decorated. "Just wait right here, and I'll go get him," Brenda stated as she turned and left the foyer.
Mac, along with his associates, followed the woman, despite her request they stay in the foyer. She was oblivious to that, as she stepped into the archway of the living room where Mitch was screaming at the television, obviously upset that his favorite team was losing. "Mitch? Um you have some com ..."
Mac watched as Mitch raised his head, all the color quickly leaving his face. The movement of Vito and Vinnie pushing by Brenda cut off her announcement of the guests. The two large brutes each grabbed Mitch by an arm and easily lifted him out of the seat as Carmine approached, pulling a black leather glove over his right hand. Carmine then quickly landed three brutal punches to Mitch's stomach, causing him to double over in pain. A small trickle of blood seeped from his mouth as he coughed.
Mac looked on, shutting out the shrill cries of the woman in front of him, pleading for the men to stop. When they didn't she ran towards the phone, threatening to call the cops. Carmine stopped beating Mitch long enough to spin around and slap her roughly across the face, sending her slumping into another chair. The stinging red blow was evidenced on her cheek as Carmine barked, "SHUT UP BITCH! YOU AIN'T DOIN NOTHIN' 'LESS WE SAY SO"
Carmine wove his black gloved hand into her hair and fisted it, twisting his fist as he pulled her back into the seat. Mitch tried in vain to come to her rescue, but another punch to the gut by Vinnie ended that attempt.
Mac then entered the room, leaning on his cane as he took each careful step, now assured that everyone would be calmed by their presence.
"Mitch, Mitch, Mitch! How long did you think you could avoid us? I warned you, that if you didn't pay, that I would come to collect! You've been dodging me for several weeks now Mitch! How long did you think I'd go without collecting my hundred thousand dollars?"
Mac walked over to a glass table where he picked up a photo frame of Mitch and Brenda on their wedding day. He looked at it briefly before placing it carefully back on the table. Then abruptly, while shaking his head, he slammed the handle of his cane into the table, shattering it and breaking the glass on the precious frame.
"We had a deal Mitch! The money or your wife! Which is it?"
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