BuckyDuckman
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A flip line spoken by a character today has me worried I'm about to write myself into a corner I don't want to visit.
The set-up:
Though their sex is consensual, she's questioning their relationship during sex. He responds by giving it to her harder. Here's an abbreviated excerpt:
. . . Tell me,” he demanded, fucking her hard enough to make the couch rock. “Tell me my cock doesn’t feel good inside your pussy.”
“Feeling good doesn’t make it right,’ she said. He put his hand on her chin, stopping her from looking away and kissed her again. Her lips moved with his. When his tongue entered her mouth to dance, her tongue accepted the invitation. . . .
More sex ensues. After she's completely ravished and truly satiated, she says to him: “Before this summer is over, I will make you my bitch."
Um - what's that mean to you? As it stands in the story, for now, his raw sexuality has possessed her with its allure. She wishes to turn the tables on him and make him lust after her with the same aching need. But is that the same as making him "her bitch?"
As it stands right now, the story is NOT a femdom story. I don't have plans of him being pegged or made into a sissy of any sort. Has my character misspoken?
The set-up:
Though their sex is consensual, she's questioning their relationship during sex. He responds by giving it to her harder. Here's an abbreviated excerpt:
. . . Tell me,” he demanded, fucking her hard enough to make the couch rock. “Tell me my cock doesn’t feel good inside your pussy.”
“Feeling good doesn’t make it right,’ she said. He put his hand on her chin, stopping her from looking away and kissed her again. Her lips moved with his. When his tongue entered her mouth to dance, her tongue accepted the invitation. . . .
More sex ensues. After she's completely ravished and truly satiated, she says to him: “Before this summer is over, I will make you my bitch."
Um - what's that mean to you? As it stands in the story, for now, his raw sexuality has possessed her with its allure. She wishes to turn the tables on him and make him lust after her with the same aching need. But is that the same as making him "her bitch?"
As it stands right now, the story is NOT a femdom story. I don't have plans of him being pegged or made into a sissy of any sort. Has my character misspoken?