BlackCaramelCreme
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Inviting more friends here...
Group Uggg
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Uggg
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Hiya BCC,
Yea, 'Group Uggg' has been a bit slow these last two weeks. I've been writing again and so with my creative bubbles floating that way the poetry has been a bit slow.
If you have some friends who'd like to post poems here you're more than welcome to invite them. Friendly creative people are always welcome here
Uggg
Yea, 'Group Uggg' has been a bit slow these last two weeks. I've been writing again and so with my creative bubbles floating that way the poetry has been a bit slow.
If you have some friends who'd like to post poems here you're more than welcome to invite them. Friendly creative people are always welcome here
Uggg
snexxer
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The date
The date was over, the night was through
There was just one thing they had to do
They walked back slowly in the dark
Hand in hand, through the deserted park
They walked in silence, nothing was said
Neither knew what was in their head
The rain did start as they approached her dorm
Both were drenched by the suddenly storm
She invited him in to help him try
To warm back up and attempt to dry
They were so wet from the fateful trip
There was no option but to strip
Slowly the clothes fell to the floor
And she was pushed against the door
Hands on cheeks, nothing amis
This would be their first real kiss.
The date was over, the night was through
There was just one thing they had to do
They walked back slowly in the dark
Hand in hand, through the deserted park
They walked in silence, nothing was said
Neither knew what was in their head
The rain did start as they approached her dorm
Both were drenched by the suddenly storm
She invited him in to help him try
To warm back up and attempt to dry
They were so wet from the fateful trip
There was no option but to strip
Slowly the clothes fell to the floor
And she was pushed against the door
Hands on cheeks, nothing amis
This would be their first real kiss.
snexxer
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Books
You are never alone
When you have a book
You only have to open it
To read and take a look
At worlds so bright and full
Of adventure and mystery
Of lions, cards and rabbit holes
And a magic ministry
She sits on her pile of books
With her glasses on her nose
Her hair pulled back, her back straight
A prim and proper pose
She glances at the shelves
And can imagine all her friends
Looking from their world's
Between her nice bookends.
You are never alone
When you have a book
You only have to open it
To read and take a look
At worlds so bright and full
Of adventure and mystery
Of lions, cards and rabbit holes
And a magic ministry
She sits on her pile of books
With her glasses on her nose
Her hair pulled back, her back straight
A prim and proper pose
She glances at the shelves
And can imagine all her friends
Looking from their world's
Between her nice bookends.
Uggg
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You are such a clever poet snexxy man!
Me thinks I know who you wrote this poem for. Was it she of the endless curiosity? I must take the time to get to know her sometime -she seems nice.
I'm supper busy irl atm and can't hang round on lit today, but I'm checking in so thanks for your contributions to my thread.
3g
snexxer
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You are such a clever poet snexxy man!
Me thinks I know who you wrote this poem for. Was it she of the endless curiosity? I must take the time to get to know her sometime -she seems nice.
I'm supper busy irl atm and can't hang round on lit today, but I'm checking in so thanks for your contributions to my thread.
3g
You may be correct in your assessment.
She is a good friend.
Have a rest now and then my friend.
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Among the many wonderful friends I have made here on Literotica there are a few of you who have become deeply dear to me.
You all know who you are.
For some of you I have written poems. Here are two poems I wrote for the lovelylight_shiva the first has actually already been posted in this thread but I didn't at the time acknowledge my muse so now I will re-post it with the second:
The grace of the predator
Does the prey not feel a moment of desire,
When pursued by the grace of the predator.
Perhaps in those last fateful fractions of time,
The jugular is offered in sacrifice to something divine.
...and the new one:
The grace of the predator II
See how they dance and prance for her
See how she turns their heads
She walks in and they fall quiet
She commands respect
She demands nothing that isn't hers
She possesses the grace of the predator
Uggg
You all know who you are.
For some of you I have written poems. Here are two poems I wrote for the lovely
light_shiva the first has actually already been posted in this thread but I didn't at the time acknowledge my muse so now I will re-post it with the second:The grace of the predator
Does the prey not feel a moment of desire,
When pursued by the grace of the predator.
Perhaps in those last fateful fractions of time,
The jugular is offered in sacrifice to something divine.
...and the new one:
The grace of the predator II
See how they dance and prance for her
See how she turns their heads
She walks in and they fall quiet
She commands respect
She demands nothing that isn't hers
She possesses the grace of the predator
Uggg
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BlackCaramelCreme
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Accomplishments
There is a yearning
A desire yet to be reached
It pulls on the heartstrings
On the edge, just at the tip
This point takes determination
Working through adversities
Pushing past obstacles
Striving towards a goal
This is the most important part
On the brink of getting there
It is easy to get distracted
Discouragement envelops you
Your resolve to finish is tested
Procrastination looms around
Finishing brings a complete feeling
Accomplishments are announced
Pride in the work done
A well deserved smile appears
Searching for the next project
Consistently growing is needed
Choosing to be better, do better
Evolving and not complacent
For some of us this is hard to do
Lacking focus hinders most
Finish lines seem unreachable
Self doubt hinders progress
An encouraging word helps
Random acts of kindness inspires
Acknowledging a presence relieves
Positivity shared lifts spirits
If the goal is to strive, help from different sources encourages even in its smallest forms, help motivation. How one can succeed when genuine favor is given instead of negativity is something to ponder the thought of.
There is a yearning
A desire yet to be reached
It pulls on the heartstrings
On the edge, just at the tip
This point takes determination
Working through adversities
Pushing past obstacles
Striving towards a goal
This is the most important part
On the brink of getting there
It is easy to get distracted
Discouragement envelops you
Your resolve to finish is tested
Procrastination looms around
Finishing brings a complete feeling
Accomplishments are announced
Pride in the work done
A well deserved smile appears
Searching for the next project
Consistently growing is needed
Choosing to be better, do better
Evolving and not complacent
For some of us this is hard to do
Lacking focus hinders most
Finish lines seem unreachable
Self doubt hinders progress
An encouraging word helps
Random acts of kindness inspires
Acknowledging a presence relieves
Positivity shared lifts spirits
If the goal is to strive, help from different sources encourages even in its smallest forms, help motivation. How one can succeed when genuine favor is given instead of negativity is something to ponder the thought of.
The_gladiator
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I like it,
I'm assuming you wrote it?
BlackCaramelCreme
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Yes. I did. Blushing.
The_gladiator
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It speaks to where I am in life, thank you for sharing.
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Hiya BCC
,Thanks for this little star. Your words reflect your ability to stay positive in testing times. You shine!
Glad will not be the only one of my friends who appreciates this. Its odd but quite a few of my friends on lit all find themselves in similar places in their lives at the moment. Its not my place to talk about other peoples circumstances but I know that several people who visit this thread will appreciate these words.
Nice to see you in here again Glad
. (You only get a rose when BCC got a rose and a kiss, but if you write me a nice poem you can have a kiss too)Uggg
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Ugggg..... ggggg!!!!!!?
Counting the Gs
Spelling out loud
Is it two, or thirty three?
If I use too many, will you pout?
If I miscount and you pout
I'll blow you some kisses
Surely the odd one will land on your snout
Even if the majority misses
Counting the Gs
Spelling out loud
Is it two, or thirty three?
If I use too many, will you pout?
If I miscount and you pout
I'll blow you some kisses
Surely the odd one will land on your snout
Even if the majority misses
Misshotndeep
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Just dropping in to say hi!
Uggg
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AHAHAHA! I want snout kisses now!
Uggg
Uggg
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Hey you
, long time no see. Where have your journeys carried you? To adventures and unexpected pleasures I hope!Uggg
LostGirlTink
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*runs in with hugs and sprinkles glitter everywhere*
Miss you!!!
Miss you!!!
Uggg
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*Rubs noses with the pretty lady*
Welcome home shiny shine
Always brings a smile to my face to see you posting in Lit and even more so when its in my thread
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Uggg
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Sorry to have been such a stranger lately Tink, I don't mean to be. I just have heaps going on at the moment combined with very limited internet (as always at the end of the month).
I promise you a nice long chit chat some time early in Apr. IOU!
Uggg
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*Rubs noses with the pretty lady*
Welcome home shiny shine
Always brings a smile to my face to see you posting in Lit and even more so when its in my thread
Nosey nosey!! *Squee*
Thanks dear. Hope you're offline enjoying paradise
Uggg
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Nosey nosey!! *Squee*
Thanks dear. Hope you're offline enjoying paradise
Its pouring with 'Paradise' rain at the moment so I'm huddling in 'paradise' office doing 'paradise' work on my 'paradise' computer. Sorry to disappoint but sometimes it rains in paradise too
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Two times of beginning a poem, only to have it erased in fluke accidents from the bracelets I never remove. Both times more than 8 lines presented. I will try this again, my last time doing this. If it happens again, it wasn't meant to be.
No One Even Sees....me
Silence fills the room, it echoes
I'm left alone with my thoughts
I close my eyes and inhale
Quietness of the room is deafening
Inactivity lingered since Saturday night
No sounds of life to give a boost
No chuckles of laughter from a call
Tongue stuck to the roof of my mouth
Notice never given of a missed visit
Looking on websites to pass time
Cleaning up became very dull so I stopped
I lay in bed very still awaiting change
I'm expected there today, unfortunately
My feelings have numbed away and I wait
Stuck in this spot on the empty bed
Broken promises never acknowledged
I want to cry, yet there are no tears
Mundane, my existence remains
Disrespectful attitudes await me there
Ungrateful responses tears my spirit
Will today be the day I find freedom
Will today be the day I find my wings to fly
Will today be the day I stop accepting less
When will what I receive match what I give
When will I be rescued from this madness
When will the atmosphere be filled with joy
I am desperately waiting in vain for a response
Access to hope has space and distance within it
Tiny speckles of hope remain within my heart
Love residing in my heart is slowly growing cold
I am diminishing and no one even notices
No one even sees....me
No One Even Sees....me
Silence fills the room, it echoes
I'm left alone with my thoughts
I close my eyes and inhale
Quietness of the room is deafening
Inactivity lingered since Saturday night
No sounds of life to give a boost
No chuckles of laughter from a call
Tongue stuck to the roof of my mouth
Notice never given of a missed visit
Looking on websites to pass time
Cleaning up became very dull so I stopped
I lay in bed very still awaiting change
I'm expected there today, unfortunately
My feelings have numbed away and I wait
Stuck in this spot on the empty bed
Broken promises never acknowledged
I want to cry, yet there are no tears
Mundane, my existence remains
Disrespectful attitudes await me there
Ungrateful responses tears my spirit
Will today be the day I find freedom
Will today be the day I find my wings to fly
Will today be the day I stop accepting less
When will what I receive match what I give
When will I be rescued from this madness
When will the atmosphere be filled with joy
I am desperately waiting in vain for a response
Access to hope has space and distance within it
Tiny speckles of hope remain within my heart
Love residing in my heart is slowly growing cold
I am diminishing and no one even notices
No one even sees....me
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Uggg
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Ohhh- Sad Poem BCC
. I hope this isn't how you're really feeling right now! You know you can always flick me a PM. I'm on my disastrous 'end of month internet' right now so I may be slow to reply but you know I will when I can.Uggg
