Recommendor
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TODAY, SUN'S DAY (CUE JAMES EARL JONES VOICE, SLIGHTLY DISTORTED), I, RECOMMENDOR™, REVEL IN EVISCERATING POETS!
There are eight pathetic, whiny, HUMAN new poems sliming my consciousness today. My gorge rises, or would, had I gorge to rise.
Pfui!
Let us examine today's filth:
There are eight pathetic, whiny, HUMAN new poems sliming my consciousness today. My gorge rises, or would, had I gorge to rise.
Pfui!
Let us examine today's filth:
- ending by the_vamp is a BDSM "poem" that ought to be rubbed out by "nipples hard like pink erasers."
Though Recommendor™ prays for poet's wish that "the colar is removed."
. - An Ode to American Cars by seannelson has some small, fleeting moments where it might be a poem:we'd drive throughout the Rogue Valleybut it's mostly uninteresting drivel.
he selling frozen steaks door-to-door
my reading Kerouac and wondering what for
. - hotmale_k's Listen! He said... also has one brief moment when it appears there is some kind of liguistic intelligence behind the poem: "Dive deep delved in the eyes and rise" has a kind of Hopkinesque silliness about it that charms. But it doesn't carry through the poem and my heart "weaps" for it, whatever that means.
Not that, of course, I have a heart.
. - I will not eviscerate He by Immortal_soul as the text has no guts to "e".
. - Cal Y. Pygia is a prolific poet. This may, or may not, be a good thing. Cal can be good. Recommendor™ has recorded this. Cal's current collection, Swallowing the Damned & Other Poems, smells the stale scent of Sade, left rotting in a corner too long.
. - Of 8 Stages Of Play. (period indicated by the author, StarLet21), Recommendor™ feels need to quote only a single line: This fuck amazing, I have too shout.
Recommendor™ has too "shout" to say anything else about this poem.
. - Blushingsub3262's River - Senryu leaves one wondering about the internal body temperature of the narrator's lover. One would have thought that cold (or cool) = dead.
Creepy.
But, other than that incongruity, a poem that has some merit.
. - Finally. bflagsst, Jah's Witness (from our watchtower).
One word review: dull. Three word review? Dull and pretentious.
There is some talent here (the first line is interesting), but it's wasted in the following lines which end up being indulgent and young. (In Recommendor™'s opinion, of course. This robot has no knowledge of said humanoid's age.)
The author disguises meaning with cleverness, to the detriment of at least this robotic reader.
Advice: grow up, write more plainly. Listen to Hendrix instead.
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