sun_sea_sky
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What Ive noticed though, often once they "get it on", no other conflict takes its place. Sure its drawn out via the possible sex acts they could move on to but that seems a "mini conflict" to me
The story that I wrote, that I like the most (not everyone agrees, it is currently 4.29) had the main characters not having sex at all, and indeed only one actual fuck in the entire story. The whole thing was the build-up, you thought "will they, won't they?".
I can think of quite a few TV shows, movies, etc. where the whole thing is sexual tension, and the movie ends just before they "do it", although you know now, they probably will.
Is that erotic? Not sure. Romantic, maybe.
Some of the stories here, by other authors, that I like the most are where the sex is late in the story, and then fairly brief, as if the tension is still there. Whereas the stories like "I noticed my sister had big tits so I fucked her senseless for the next year" don't make a heap of sense to me.