MoonlightandRoses
Literotica Guru
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- Nov 10, 2016
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Jehoram and Areala, the Bechdel test is interesting, but I don’t feel it is exact enough. I wouldn’t say that a story that only has one such dialog would necessarily be female-centric and I would say that a dialog where two women are discussing a man would be female-centric, as long as the reader is shown the women’s characters and feelings. But it is a good start.
Wise yes you are right – good point. I didn’t feel that for my purpose in posting this the story, plot, conflict and resolution were that important. What was important is that “This story would highlight the companionship among the women. Their relationships between each other, as well has their individual emotions, pleasures, fears, disappointments and achievements.” Actually the plot and the ending are not very important to me in reading. What is most important are the images conveyed to me, noting that dialog can convey images. While I haven’t thought of them yet, the resolutions would be different for each women in their particulars, but in general I would have each woman learn something important about themselves which would help lead them to a happier life.
To all, I plan to add to this scenario tomorrow.
Moonlight and Roses,
Wise yes you are right – good point. I didn’t feel that for my purpose in posting this the story, plot, conflict and resolution were that important. What was important is that “This story would highlight the companionship among the women. Their relationships between each other, as well has their individual emotions, pleasures, fears, disappointments and achievements.” Actually the plot and the ending are not very important to me in reading. What is most important are the images conveyed to me, noting that dialog can convey images. While I haven’t thought of them yet, the resolutions would be different for each women in their particulars, but in general I would have each woman learn something important about themselves which would help lead them to a happier life.
To all, I plan to add to this scenario tomorrow.
Moonlight and Roses,