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you got itNo blanket or cover could hide what insatiable lust lie underneath. Fingers began to trace her curves through the sheets, never touching skin. She softly moaned, beautiful tones that rang inside his ears. He gently gripped those lovely breasts and lips soon followed suit. How could such pleasure emerge from almost nothing? This cotton barrier would soon be removed.
I think I got it. This was fun!
welcome, and you're welcome. they're just fun to try and good for honing skills.I'm new here and looking at the exercises am sure they will be of great use to me
thanks
you got it too.A chandelier was bright. She twisted and turned to its light. How can I be of help? The line had immediate impact. Her reaction brought about fear. Think not such dire consequences.
niceI kept thinking of you. My friends said it was insane. Your apartment window glows with blue light. Sidewalks wet from misty rain. Waiting for a sign, word, anything. Desperation makes my stomach ache miserably, postponing sleep indefinitely.
seven sentences instead of six. i wonder if that extra one causes problems... repetition of 'on', 'of', 'this', 'is', - i may have missed one.I slide through the darkness like a nightmare. Shuddering black pavement cringes into silver submission under an angry whip of headlights and wheels, miles shattered to dust. This engine runs on blood, pain, fury, hopeless rage at uncaring stars or God- who knows what? Fueled with tragedy, it growls on forever through endless highways. Shifting gears, slipping sideways through lanes, but this is not enough. Without your pulse beating out a bassline for Michael McDermott on the stereo, there is no rhythm. Dawn breaks over distant horizons, pounds my heart into shards of bloody memory, agonizing loneliness.
(I don't think I managed to repeat anything, but I probably did.)
the more difficult it is, the more we learn about word choice - in my opinion. very glad you tried it and i hope you try it again.Anger burnt red in Daddy’s eyes. A leather strap smacked flesh once again, finally breaking all resistance. Laura wept uncontrollably. She tried stopping herself crying without any success. Tears only made it worse. Her father finally raised the belt above his head signifying an end to proceedings.
Wow, that was fucking difficult.
One star at night is what a child sets young wishes on. Does every heavenly body carry youthful dreams? It seems to me the heavens are filled with potential miracles. Perhaps every meteor carries miracles fulfilled falling to earth. Wouldn’t life be wonderful to think about dreams landing every night. Hopes flying home with fiery wings.
WSO, Did this the first time round -- I've had rather too much Absinth to attempt it today though (but apparently just managed thirty words in spite of being shit faced drunk)
The touch of his hands on her body roused feelings of fevered lust, arousing her to heights she had never been before. Kisses so hot they scaled her lips and burned her mind. Tendrils of molton lava swirled from her belly. Liquid honey flowed from her womans center. Hands clenched in desperated unadulterated need of his body. She craved the sweet release of ravishment.
Cars, Truck, Buses and Bikes roared past at stupid speeds. My tyres go round, chewing up the tarmac with increasing fury. Grey metal urged on by an impatient foot. The wind whistles through the half-open window. Why don't they get out of the damned way? Do they not realise my daughter has died ?
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Cars, Truck, Buses and Bikes roared past at stupid speeds. My tyres go round, chewing up tarmac with increasing fury. Grey metal urged on by an impatient foot. A howling wind whistles through the half-open window. Why don't they get out of my damned way? Do they not realise my daughter has died ?
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PS. This one actually happened.
firstly, i am so sorry for your loss. i hope that along with time, writing will help ease the hurt.
i have just re-read and realised i missed another repetition, the word 'they' in both the last two sentences. is there a reason that the vehicle words have initial capitals? (i'm not questioning if that is right or wrong, just asking if you have good reason for capitalising them *smile* ).
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The morning sun was bright on a clear dawn. There'd been rain that night and little jewels of dropped water stuck like glue to the petals of the red rose. I dare not breathe lest I moved them. My set-up my camera went click and captured a moment for posterity. She would be pleased.
Every night I hear the cars. They drive past my open window at all hours. Buses load and unload passengers. People are laughing, joking, relating. This city never sleeps. Must it keep me awake, too?
Summer night on the open road and the car's going well. Moonlight obviates some of the need for lights, but it's safer that way. Trucks flash onwards past me, their bright white lights splitting the dark like a new sun. I hurry on, because she needs me.
not sure i repeated
So the war between humans and vampires finally ends here.
What need for the shepherd when the wolves are all gone?
My time on this world has come to an end. Death comes for us all.
We can only choose how to face it when it happens. I will be watching you from the gates of hell.