JaxRhapsody
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I think I could write this. Another cannonball contest to see who's is best?
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I think I could write this. Another cannonball contest to see who's is best?
Then it can be a "bad boy" that decided to pick on a nerdy wimp with a hot girlfriend. I want the girl to refuse the bully at first, but after the first fuck completely change her mind and gets into the bully and gets off cheating on the wimp.
Does the bully have any redeeming human characteristics? Maybe he's an evil bully, but his hobby is sketching. Or stamp collecting. Does he have inner conflicts? Maybe he's a bully and fucking the hot chick only because of poor impulse control, and is secretly wracked with guilt about it.
Lets give him no redeeming quality at all. That way it's hot how the girl fucks him JUST because he's hot looking and got that bad boy thing going on. Nothing else at all. In fact her bf is a talented niced guy.
I rather the opposite bullies gf fucks the nerd for revenge, because he's been cheating or something or because he's an asshole.
So this wimp is miraculously dating a hot chick. The wimp is being bullied by this hot guy.
The girl is secretly fantasizing having sex with the bully, but she does not admit it when confronted by the bully. However, after several confrontations, she sees the bully's huge cock by chance. Failing to resist the temptation, she fucks the living shit out of the bully. The relationship escalates, and ends up with the two fucking while the wimp is being tied on a chair.
Anyone interested in writing this? I wish I can write a story.... but I'm a horrible writer so. Tell me what you think!
But that's not as hot as the other way around I think. I wish someone can write this.
The way I'd write it, it's both mean and gentle.I would write it this way. The other way sounds mean.
The writer's idea wasn't getting much in the way of support. Besides if EVERYBODY wants to rewrite it it's unlikely to get read in it's present form.
That said I have no problem with the original premise, just prepare to get flamed to beyond the grave. People will be calling you a sick fuck for years to come.
But that happens with most story suggestions on here. Someone will post and others will suggest changes that they like until the plot is unrecognizable.
As for flames, I personally don't care. Most of my stories involve adultery and I still occasionally get an 'outraged' reply. It makes me laugh because they appear to read thoroughly stories they hate. If I read a story I don't like I stop reading.
As for the original idea, I still really like it, though I see the character as more of a bad boy/jerk than a real bully. The story I have been working on off and on is coming along. I'm trying to re-motivate myself to finish the thing and several others I have in various stages of completion.
It's amusing to me how so many people had such a negative reaction to the original premise and wanted to re-write it completely. "No, the nerd should win!" Lol...not at all what dude was asking for. I'm not saying that, as a writer, I wouldn't put my own spin on it though.
Here's a twist. Everything goes exactly as the OP wants. The bully starts owning nerd boys girlfriend who, btw, shouldn't be an A crowd cheer leading goddess. that just doesn't make sense. I'd probably see her more as a girl that isn't very confident, wears loose clothes and glasses that cover up what's actually a cute curvy body and very pretty face...the classic ugly duckling that, with a savvy girlfriend's help, could turn in to one of the hottest girls in school.
The bully is fucking her regularly behind the wimp's back and she slowly starts to change her appearance. She starts to wear clothes that show off what she's got more. She ditches the glasses for contacts, starts using makeup. All of these changes just make her doting wimp of a boyfriend even more whipped. Then, one night the wimp finally catches her with his tormentor and feels woefully inadequate. This is when the bully jumps up and punks him out yet again...binds him to a chair and starts fucking his girlfriend right in front of him. The wimp is heartbroken but he can't help his little dick from getting hard watching them.
After they're done she looks at her dejected boyfriend looking down in shame at his little hard penis and thinks about how feminine a face her boyfriend has and, thinking about her own transformation, just how potentially pretty the wimp could look. They set about feminizing him...at first the bully takes part in this to just further humiliate the boyfriend but once the wimp has a pair of his girlfriend's frilly panties and some make up on the bully sees the wimp makes quite a pretty girl with his full, sexy red lipsticked lips and pretty mascara'd eyes and starts to get turned on at the thought of making wimp boi suck his cock and even bending his bitch ass over and fucking him...all in front his now hot little girlfriend. The wimp doesn't want to admit it but it excites him and he becomes their willing fluffer and fucktoy.
But if you really want some "poetic justice" here's some. Maybe the bully enjoys the way wimpboi sucks his cock and fucking him so much that he becomes addicted to it. Maybe the wimp is really good at licking his unfaithful girlfriend's pussy and neither her or the bully can get enough of their new femboi plaything. The nerdy wimp begins to enjoy the power and control of being a sex object and being intelligent, if not physically strong, begins to manipulate both of them until they're both completely under his thumb. Maybe to solidify his dominance and make it less subtle he gets pictures of the bully sucking his little tranny cock while his girlfriend fluffs his ass getting it ready for the bully's big cock. The final scene could show the bully on his knees tonguing the wimp's sexy, sissy ass...stroking his big cock while he begs the wimp to let him fuck him. His girlfriend is kneeling in front of him slavishly sucking his little cock. He's smiling down at them triumphantly.
The writer's idea wasn't getting much in the way of support. Besides if EVERYBODY wants to rewrite it it's unlikely to get read in it's present form.
That said I have no problem with the original premise, just prepare to get flamed to beyond the grave. People will be calling you a sick fuck for years to come.
A much more interesting story, but unlikely to gather much support. Most people want comfortable and appeasing.
I second the motion
I forgot about this. I think i could write it as close to the original concept and I dont care if I get flamed or whatever. It sounds decent actually. At some point I will have room for another story. If I dont forget this again.