tomlitilia
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In a different thread a while back, someone pointed out it's weird to refer to someone as e.g. "her husband" if the character has been introduced before and we know they are married. I realize refer to characters by their relation ("his wife", "her secretary") a lot, mainly to not repeat the same names over and over, and at the same time avoid pronoun confusion. Similarly, I often refer to characters by their characteristics ("the blonde", "the tall woman"), which also serves the purpose of painting pictures.
Question: Based on the below story, do you think I'm overusing these tricks? The specific story involves (in a rather mild bdsm context, if it matters) a lot of woman-woman interaction, which is where "her" on its own can be confusing.
https://www.literotica.com/s/above-and-beyond-ch-01-of-04
Question: Based on the below story, do you think I'm overusing these tricks? The specific story involves (in a rather mild bdsm context, if it matters) a lot of woman-woman interaction, which is where "her" on its own can be confusing.
https://www.literotica.com/s/above-and-beyond-ch-01-of-04