British Filth
Really Really Experienced
- Joined
- Jun 22, 2005
- Posts
- 335
I'd be grateful for any constructive feedback on this:
http://www.literotica.com/s/surprise-cum-slut
I've been exploring a more dominant side recently. Not heavy BDSM, more light power play, but I've no point of reference other than the feedback I get from listeners, which tends to be biased one way or the other.
If anyone has a spare 20 minutes to give this a listen and let me know where I could improve, either here or by PM, if be very grateful
Thanks in advance.
http://www.literotica.com/s/surprise-cum-slut
I've been exploring a more dominant side recently. Not heavy BDSM, more light power play, but I've no point of reference other than the feedback I get from listeners, which tends to be biased one way or the other.
If anyone has a spare 20 minutes to give this a listen and let me know where I could improve, either here or by PM, if be very grateful
Thanks in advance.