WickedEve
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July 22 Part 2
Trench Brainfare
we hoped for just
one more
innocuous starshell
to light the pages
Some poems are simply perfect. Be sure to offer this poet feedback and encouraging votes.
~~~~~
Just like Venice
striped umbrella becomes a gondolier's shirt
and wrought iron table and chairs
become outdoor breakfast cafe
with chocolate spread on toast
coffee to die for
wait...
From her alley, this talented poet turns Baltimore into Venice.
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Her Seduction-Proof Skin
Teflon blouse sheds charm
Wicks moisture
Keeps her so cool and dry
you could flay your tongue on her flagpole
Very clever. Make sure you don't miss this one.
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Forty Poets Wood
Porters dropped their baggage, even liars stopped their lying,
swirls stood still in coffee cups and friars stopped their frying.
Trendy hippies held their tokes, champagne in grails stopped bubbling,
ferocious cats stopped chasing rats, the mutt's howl was so troubling.
This poet does some name dropping.
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There are more good poems but I'm all read out at the moment.
Trench Brainfare
we hoped for just
one more
innocuous starshell
to light the pages
Some poems are simply perfect. Be sure to offer this poet feedback and encouraging votes.
~~~~~
Just like Venice
striped umbrella becomes a gondolier's shirt
and wrought iron table and chairs
become outdoor breakfast cafe
with chocolate spread on toast
coffee to die for
wait...
From her alley, this talented poet turns Baltimore into Venice.
~~~~~
Her Seduction-Proof Skin
Teflon blouse sheds charm
Wicks moisture
Keeps her so cool and dry
you could flay your tongue on her flagpole
Very clever. Make sure you don't miss this one.
~~~~~
Forty Poets Wood
Porters dropped their baggage, even liars stopped their lying,
swirls stood still in coffee cups and friars stopped their frying.
Trendy hippies held their tokes, champagne in grails stopped bubbling,
ferocious cats stopped chasing rats, the mutt's howl was so troubling.
This poet does some name dropping.
~~~~~
There are more good poems but I'm all read out at the moment.