I finally took a plunge to submit and was rejected. Basically, it was style (good or bad) that was the problem, showing up as unattributed internal monologue.
The story was written the female lead as 2nd person, "you". The male lead was telling the story as " I".
The problem came in that there were some first person thoughts conveying feelings, etc. that seemed awkward and less intimate by adding the "she thought".
Example:
Ohmigod! He's really gonna do that!
Vs.
"Ohmigod! He's really gonna do that!," you thought.
1) I discovered that I can use HTML <i></i>
<I>Ohmigod! He's really gonna do that</I>
2) I considered adding some leading spaces to indent.
Any thoughts on how to do that?
The story was written the female lead as 2nd person, "you". The male lead was telling the story as " I".
The problem came in that there were some first person thoughts conveying feelings, etc. that seemed awkward and less intimate by adding the "she thought".
Example:
Ohmigod! He's really gonna do that!
Vs.
"Ohmigod! He's really gonna do that!," you thought.
1) I discovered that I can use HTML <i></i>
<I>Ohmigod! He's really gonna do that</I>
2) I considered adding some leading spaces to indent.
Any thoughts on how to do that?