GuiltyPleasure
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Choose one of your poems, posted or not, any length or form. The exercise is to remove and words you feel are unnecessary, then go back and remove more. Keep removing with out losing the meaning of the poem. Reduce it by a ¼, a 1/3 then ½ until you reach the essence.
Post both versions in this thread, before and after.
Post both versions in this thread, before and after.