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"First sentences are doors to worlds." --Ursula K. LeGuin
I'm reading a book of writer's exercises, WHAT IF? by Bernays & Painter. Among the first exercises are, think of a title, and the first line or paragraph that goes with it. I borrowed or crafted a few first lines:
SEX ED - Dad told me what sex was the day after I first had it.
AND WHEN I DIE - I want to be buried with the body of a 12-year-old girl.
BLACK HOLE SUN - When the end of time came, I was enjoying great anal sex.
ROSES ARE RED, TOO - "What a lovely cock," she whispered, just before biting it off.
HOME ON THE RANGE - I'd been out here too long -- the sheep were looking enticing.
IMPACT - When your parachute doesn't open, you wonder how big a hole you'll make.
And I came up with some opening paragraphs for SciFi-etc stories:
HOUSTON, WE HAVE A PROBLEM - The lander's engine sputtered and died just as I reached the planet's surface. Oh shit. And I had run out of condoms.
TRISEXUAL TRIFECTA - The natives were getting restless, and horny. Here on Sirius IV, that could only mean trouble. I checked my blaster: fully charged.
CTHULHU, WE LOVE YOU - Observing the mating rituals of followers of a tentacled elder god can be rather unsettling. Did we bring enough barf bags?
HONKY TONK LAGOON - I really hate when 'gator-folk get drunk. It's not bad enough that these human-reptilian hybrids smell awful. Their bladders are weak, too.
QUANTUM UNCERTAINTY - I had succeeded! After all these years, all my efforts, all the pain, I knew I would win a Nobel Prize! I had finally captured and weighed a neutrino! Unfortunately, I found it in my cheating whore of a wife's overused cunt.
As an exercise, write the first lines for these titles:
DAILY RATION OF PASSION -
LICK IT WHERE IT TINGLES -
BRIDGE OVER TROUBLED DAUGHTERS -
WIVES AND LOVERS AND POLICE -
IT ITCHES AND DRIPS -
YET ANOTHER ORGY -
I actually have a real-life opening scene for IT ITCHES AND DRIPS. I'll post it later.
I'm reading a book of writer's exercises, WHAT IF? by Bernays & Painter. Among the first exercises are, think of a title, and the first line or paragraph that goes with it. I borrowed or crafted a few first lines:
SEX ED - Dad told me what sex was the day after I first had it.
AND WHEN I DIE - I want to be buried with the body of a 12-year-old girl.
BLACK HOLE SUN - When the end of time came, I was enjoying great anal sex.
ROSES ARE RED, TOO - "What a lovely cock," she whispered, just before biting it off.
HOME ON THE RANGE - I'd been out here too long -- the sheep were looking enticing.
IMPACT - When your parachute doesn't open, you wonder how big a hole you'll make.
And I came up with some opening paragraphs for SciFi-etc stories:
HOUSTON, WE HAVE A PROBLEM - The lander's engine sputtered and died just as I reached the planet's surface. Oh shit. And I had run out of condoms.
TRISEXUAL TRIFECTA - The natives were getting restless, and horny. Here on Sirius IV, that could only mean trouble. I checked my blaster: fully charged.
CTHULHU, WE LOVE YOU - Observing the mating rituals of followers of a tentacled elder god can be rather unsettling. Did we bring enough barf bags?
HONKY TONK LAGOON - I really hate when 'gator-folk get drunk. It's not bad enough that these human-reptilian hybrids smell awful. Their bladders are weak, too.
QUANTUM UNCERTAINTY - I had succeeded! After all these years, all my efforts, all the pain, I knew I would win a Nobel Prize! I had finally captured and weighed a neutrino! Unfortunately, I found it in my cheating whore of a wife's overused cunt.
As an exercise, write the first lines for these titles:
DAILY RATION OF PASSION -
LICK IT WHERE IT TINGLES -
BRIDGE OVER TROUBLED DAUGHTERS -
WIVES AND LOVERS AND POLICE -
IT ITCHES AND DRIPS -
YET ANOTHER ORGY -
I actually have a real-life opening scene for IT ITCHES AND DRIPS. I'll post it later.