Scrubber
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- Dec 28, 2011
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I've been hanging around other areas of Lit for a little while, but poetry has always interested me. I've taken the plunge and here is something I have written about meeting someone here. I'd be interested in comments if anyone has the time.
How can it be
That you and me
Should meet?
I'd like to know
Why it is so.
What cosmic plan's complete?
Just random chance?
Just happenstance?
Maybe.
If that is true
Then why do you
Keep filling up my dreams?
What made me spy
Your little cry
Just then?
In that great sea
Of misery
Of disappointed men
And women too
Who post how blue
They are.
Why did it touch
Me quite so much?
Was it some lucky star
That made you write
And me alight
On it?
I think that we
Were meant to be
Right there, right then, on Lit.
How can it be
That you and me
Should meet?
I'd like to know
Why it is so.
What cosmic plan's complete?
Just random chance?
Just happenstance?
Maybe.
If that is true
Then why do you
Keep filling up my dreams?
What made me spy
Your little cry
Just then?
In that great sea
Of misery
Of disappointed men
And women too
Who post how blue
They are.
Why did it touch
Me quite so much?
Was it some lucky star
That made you write
And me alight
On it?
I think that we
Were meant to be
Right there, right then, on Lit.