I put a bunch of words together, but I'm not sure they are in the right order...

Chimney Sweep

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Howdy!

I have a several stories ready for an editor and I need you!

Firstly, here's my old stuff:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=261004&page=submissions

Secondly, a brief description of what I need edited:

Bed Full of Pussy. 3900 words. Group Sex.

I Tripped Down the Stairs... 3300 words. Erotic Couplings. Still working on the title.

Number One. 4050 words. Erotic Couplings.

Gina at a Wedding. 5700 words. Erotic Couplings.

The Minotaur. 11,600 words. Non-human/mythical

(In Charge ch. 1 is already posted.)
In Charge Ch. 2. 6300 words. Erotic Couplings.

In Charge Ch. 3. 2600 words. Erotic Couplings


That is a lot so I'm happy to do this piecemeal. Feel free to cherry pick - perhaps I can get multiple editors working for me. Does that count as group sex?

I have no time considerations.

I am after a mild mannered grammar Nazi with an eye toward content and style. I hate it when I repeat a phrase or word too close together and I never met a comma I couldn't splice. My stuff is fairly clean and I am open to all sorts of editing/opinion. I have thick skin and appreciate constructive criticism.

Please let me know if you are interested.

Thanks!
Chimney Sweep
 
More info, coming up.

Bed Full of Pussy.
3900 words. Group Sex. FFM.
A man comes home to find his wife and her best friend in bed. He joins in.


I Tripped Down the Stairs...
3300 words. Erotic Couplings. Still working on the title.
A man fools around with his pregnant sister-in-law.


Number One.
4050 words. Erotic Couplings.
A woman recalls her top three cocks and tells some hot stories about Number One.


Gina at a Wedding.
5700 words. Erotic Couplings.
Gina and I attend a wedding, stealing away whenever possible for some hot fun. Part of a loose collection of stories about Gina (see In Charge, Gina & Brandon, etc.)


The Minotaur.
11,600 words. Non-human/mythical
I don't know what the hell this is. Mythical romance? More romance/adventure than porn, at least. This one may be way off track.


(In Charge ch. 1 is already posted.)
In Charge Ch. 2.
6300 words. Erotic Couplings.
Gina and I take turns being in charge of the action. This is Gina's first night. Being a little too shy to come out and say what she likes, she writes it down on some cards (with a hidden message.)

In Charge Ch. 3.
2600 words. Erotic Couplings
Gina and I take turns being in charge of the action. My second night starts rocky but ends with two bangs.

Is that better?

I have a pretty good Hot-to-Not ratio so hopefully you won't find my work too tedious.

Thanks!
-CS
 
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