goliathslawyer
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This is the first time I've written something. I want to know if i'm decent, good or just shit. All i request is an honest feedback.
I wrote a four part series and would like to know your thoughts:
https://www.literotica.com/s/punished-by-the-professor
https://www.literotica.com/s/punished-by-the-professor-ch-02
https://www.literotica.com/s/punished-by-the-professor-ch-03
https://www.literotica.com/s/punished-by-the-professor-ch-04
Errors in grammar, flow of the story, anything, really. I want to improve.
I wrote a four part series and would like to know your thoughts:
https://www.literotica.com/s/punished-by-the-professor
https://www.literotica.com/s/punished-by-the-professor-ch-02
https://www.literotica.com/s/punished-by-the-professor-ch-03
https://www.literotica.com/s/punished-by-the-professor-ch-04
Errors in grammar, flow of the story, anything, really. I want to improve.