Make a haiku

UnseenMaiden

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Make a haiku.

Go on. It's not terribly hard

Five syllables
Seven Syllables
Five

and make sure you say what you think about the haiku above yours

Sounds of thunder roll.
War brews in the depths of night.
My cats are crazy.
 
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and make sure you say what you think about the haiku above yours

Sounds of thunder roll.
War brews in the depths of night.
My cats are crazy.

I quite like that, and understand it quite well, having felines in my life, also. :)
Here's mine...

The gentle rain falls.
Mist catches in my lashes.
I laugh to feel it.
 
It makes me wanting to go dancing in a spring shower.. too bad it's March and bloody cold at that.

All the things I hate
Could fill up the Bering Strait.
Dare you to debate.
 
It makes me wanting to go dancing in a spring shower.. too bad it's March and bloody cold at that.

All the things I hate
Could fill up the Bering Strait.
Dare you to debate.

I love that. My sentiments, exactly.


Distant wailing sounds.
Must be the baby next door.
Laugh, and shut the drapes.
 
Distant wailing sounds.
Must be the baby next door.
Laugh, and shut the drapes.

A problem I am so glad I do not have to deal with.

When the doors open
Time springs forth, with joyful sounds
Too soon, it's over
 
Beautiful...


When Night's air is clear
The Moon dances on her axis
And I lie, waiting.
 
his lips on my clit
squirming uncontrollably
ecstasy is mine

Well, I can't speak to being on the receiving end... but I do so enjoy being at the giving end...


Motion flickers, where?
Eyes, glowing in the darkness.
Evil lies in wait.
 
Darkly seductive... I like.

Will you come to me?
Tread softly into the night
I will be waiting....
 
Oh, delicate but not...


The unseen calling
To taste the sweet temptations
Why should you resist?
 
Oh... smooth. :)


Listen and heed the
Tantalising seduction
Melt with the unknown.
 
Why thank you. You're not doing too bad there, yourself. ;)

I let myself melt,
Sumbit to her desires,
Lost, in her mystery.

Why, thank you. Such richness :kiss:

Gasping for his kiss
Swimming into the unknown
Of such dark desires.
 
Why, thank you. Such richness :kiss:

Gasping for his kiss
Swimming into the unknown
Of such dark desires.

What can I say? You are being a most wondeful muse this evening. :rose:
It's been a while since I gave thought to things poetically.

Falling as one, each
enraptured by the Other.
Alone. Together.
 
What can I say? You are being a most wondeful muse this evening. :rose:
It's been a while since I gave thought to things poetically.

Falling as one, each
enraptured by the Other.
Alone. Together.


Thank you.:kiss: And for the inspiration. It feels good to finally able to write again... :kiss:

In that one moment
Sands of time has flowed into
an Eternity.
 
feels like ev'ryone
passes by never looking
loneliness abounds
 
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Thank you.:kiss: And for the inspiration. It feels good to finally able to write again... :kiss:

In that one moment
Sands of time has flowed into
an Eternity.

You are welcome. And thank you. It is long since I wrote, as well. :kiss:

Two lives pulse as one.
In that forever moment,
The universe sings.
 
That one is nice and romantic. A lot more serious than the crap I'm about to churn out!

I'm very hungry.
The bag of Doritos calls.
I will eat them now.
 
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~ That wasn't crap.

~ Unless you meant what you would churn out after the Doritos :D

A tip from sadist.
The next time when having sex
Call out sister's name.
 
btw.. someone in this thread needs to learn how to count. otherwise it's just poetry, not a haiku. :eek:
 
Depressed as of late.
Here, without you by my side.
I need a tissue.
 
In the dead of night
limping in the rain, by you
i see no remourse
 
"limping in the rain"...haunting. Thank you so much for shaing :)

Missing you, like air.
Like phantom limbs, you linger.
Never forgotten.
 
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