I don’t know what I’m doing wrong. I submitted 2 stories with little dialogue and they were approved.. now the one I’m trying to submit has a lot of dialogue and I keep having it rejected for ‘break up your paragraphs and punctuation’ etc.
Can someone help me proofread this one story? I can use the structure etc for future stories.
Don’t know if it matters, but the story is about a bi threesome.
Pm me please
Jon
Can someone help me proofread this one story? I can use the structure etc for future stories.
Don’t know if it matters, but the story is about a bi threesome.
Pm me please
Jon