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I think it depends on context. What is the guy masturbating to? What's the story category?
I've written some male masturbation scenes that have gone over well, in terms of popularity and ratings, but I've also noticed that in some cases readers may get impatient with masturbation and want things to progress to the next step. I think a lot of it has to do with the expectation that the reader has at the beginning of the story, and whether masturbation will meet or satisfy that expectation.
In that scenario, the bulk of your writing would probably be the fantasy in the professor's head while he is masturbating. You might have a little description of the physical act, but the more interesting part would be about what is in his head wishing about what might have happened. At least until he gets to near completion, anyway.Good Questions:
Non/Con (much more on the reluctant side) where is female student is seducing her professor. The scene would be after the professor turns her down the first time but was obviously tempted.
In that scenario, the bulk of your writing would probably be the fantasy in the professor's head while he is masturbating. You might have a little description of the physical act, but the more interesting part would be about what is in his head wishing about what might have happened. At least until he gets to near completion, anyway.
Speaking more as a reader than a writer, this is always good advice when approaching a masturbation scenario.
Otherwise...
That is, of course, assuming you are going at it from a point of view that would see into the professor's mind.
God, I love engineering porn. Add a desmodromic valve train to that animation and there isn't a Lit story that could touch it.
rj
Soma 99, I think such a scene could go over well. I’m very interested in the idea of switching gender roles and feel that having the woman being the one looking and the male being the one being looked at does that, particularly if the woman was the one instigating the action. However, I would prefer the opposite of what guffmut wrote. I would be most interested in what is going on in the woman’s head and what she sees. As I have written in my two threads on this board I like where the female and her feelings and desires are the focus of the story.
There was a recent post about a story where a guy in an English pub was masturbating while fantasizing over some of the other patrons. I thought the concept of male public masturbation in that context went over well. A writer would have to work hard to keep the creepy raincoat flasher/potential rapist or sex offender stuff out of the story, but it could be done and be well received. Or at least I think it would.
.....I've also thought that public fondling would be an interesting story to write. A sort of CFNM situation where females fondled the male to keep him excited but not letting him cum and doing this while in public or at a all female party or something similar. His whole being would be centered on getting past the edging and cumming. I don't read CFNM stories as a rule so I don't know if this has been done or not. It's just an idea as an extension of the above and the writer would have to incorporate some bondage elements to keep the male from masturbating to climax on his own.
I think it can work as long as it doesn't finish into a potted plant
Thank you all for the feedback! If any guys want to send me a few key descriptors you think I should use I wouldn't be mad at ya!
Good Questions:
Non/Con (much more on the reluctant side) where is female student is seducing her professor. The scene would be after the professor turns her down the first time but was obviously tempted.
Lol. Well, speaking as the fondler rather than as the fondlee, it's certainly fun to do that and not get caught or seen. The nervousness about being spotted works far better than bondage at keeping the fondlee from doing anything much. Don't know about as a story but I'm sure it has. You've given me a great idea for the story I'm working on now. Thanks a gazillion - Tiffany is about to tease her boss right in front of her husband without her husband noticing .... in the middle of a party. Ohhhhhh. Going to have to write this one in my head for now. Or in the car on the way home but I better not distract the driver to much....
God, I love engineering porn. Add a desmodromic valve train to that animation and there isn't a Lit story that could touch it.
rj
God, I love engineering porn. Add a desmodromic valve train to that animation and there isn't a Lit story that could touch it.
rj