twelveoone
ground zero
- Joined
- Mar 13, 2004
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Or continue, the then and now isn't a bad idea. My rule of thumb is if you say anything stupid, enclose it in quotes. i.e. let a character do the dirty work.Thanks for the mention, twelveoone, of "St. Mary's Minstrel Show" in NPR. You're absolutely right. I should have ended it after the 3rd stanza.
Live and learn.
But as best as I can tell, you done a fine job in the character, probably an excellent job with the zeitgeist.