An honest critique required

max_veridius

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I've penned the first part of a longer story. The plot tells of the erotic journey of King Phillip of ancient Greece.

As a first time author, I'm looking for sound editorial advice, including some feedback on the story itself.

Truthful, but gentle with words, if you please

Any volunteers?

Max
 
I've penned the first part of a longer story. The plot tells of the erotic journey of King Phillip of ancient Greece.

As a first time author, I'm looking for sound editorial advice, including some feedback on the story itself.

Truthful, but gentle with words, if you please

Any volunteers?

Max

I might but not seeing a link?
 
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