Maria2394
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- Feb 14, 2002
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New Poems
Just This, by echoes_s
...
she is innocent
i cry,
four bared walls,
pains reflection off tears,
nails grasped to stain
splinter new grain into wood...
and The storm has some excellent descriptions and observations, you write so well echoes, always a pleasure to read you
echoes shows us how she works her word magic in this piece, in fact, she has several today, but I liked these the best, so the rest of you all, readem, vote and send FB
~~~
revolving door, by tungtied2u, is a look at apathy and fear, ( I think) and its always been my observation that the dreading of something, is always worse than the outcome....
~~~
Tasting, by Substance, is a delicious short erotic poem, read, taste and enjoy
~~~
The senses of Salt, by PatCarrington is just a beautiful, well written wonderful piece of storytelling in poetry form, read this one, taste the salt, feel the wind, its there
... hear the whimpers of his rods
as they go crying through the night,
ropes in knots that smell
of shipwrecks, tears of oceans
as they wet and whip his hair...
~~~
Once and Now, by Angeline, is a stunning, slightly cynical take on the fairy tale condition, I never really believed in Prince Charming anyway, this is some of ange's finer work, I truly enjoyed this read,
...Night must be enough
happily ever after
because it absents the day,
because we are grateful
for hours that skirt
the edge of memory,
because night is neverland,
knitting a cloak of quiet
against uncertainty...
~~~
Writen in Haste on Napkin, by no bagles, well, it starts out like an angry ramble then turns into a love poem!! what can I say, I love the way this guy writes, I really do. I would make one suggestion, maybe add an S to crumble? I know it was written in haste, on a napkin, no less, but that one word stumbled me a tad
...I kneel to mould
from your imprints
in sand
or in mud
replicas
in gold
of your pure
perfection
more wondrous
than fiction...
~~~
Left Behind, by bluerains is a short poem, contemplating the fate of a ghost left behind. I had that experience once, when we moved here, we tried to get out ghost to come with us, but she either wouldnt, or couldnt. I like this poem, blue, very good work
~~~
still they are gone, by annaswirls
... below river-bed deep in silent labor
lifting rocks rebuilding storm-worn banks
filling hollows unable to stop our attempts ...
anna can switch for tease, to temptress to serious as all get out and I like when she throws me something i dont always get on first read. This poem sort of like that
~~~
Sierra Rose this poem, is so filled with emotion I felt my heart drop at the end, wow, it left me feeling and I love that feeling. Excellent work, DA,
~~~~
well if I had to pick a favorite, I couldnt do it, so I wont even try. I thought I was stuck with 4 audio poems today that I couldnt even hear and then got so many wonderful pieces to read. I truly enjoy this when there is so much to choose from sooo, if I missed any that need a mention, feel free, as always, I am not perfect and do not strive to be, I am maria, and I am, just me
happy writing Poets, and have a lovely day!~! xoxoxoxoxo
New Poems
Just This, by echoes_s
...
she is innocent
i cry,
four bared walls,
pains reflection off tears,
nails grasped to stain
splinter new grain into wood...
and The storm has some excellent descriptions and observations, you write so well echoes, always a pleasure to read you
echoes shows us how she works her word magic in this piece, in fact, she has several today, but I liked these the best, so the rest of you all, readem, vote and send FB
~~~
revolving door, by tungtied2u, is a look at apathy and fear, ( I think) and its always been my observation that the dreading of something, is always worse than the outcome....
~~~
Tasting, by Substance, is a delicious short erotic poem, read, taste and enjoy
~~~
The senses of Salt, by PatCarrington is just a beautiful, well written wonderful piece of storytelling in poetry form, read this one, taste the salt, feel the wind, its there
... hear the whimpers of his rods
as they go crying through the night,
ropes in knots that smell
of shipwrecks, tears of oceans
as they wet and whip his hair...
~~~
Once and Now, by Angeline, is a stunning, slightly cynical take on the fairy tale condition, I never really believed in Prince Charming anyway, this is some of ange's finer work, I truly enjoyed this read,
...Night must be enough
happily ever after
because it absents the day,
because we are grateful
for hours that skirt
the edge of memory,
because night is neverland,
knitting a cloak of quiet
against uncertainty...
~~~
Writen in Haste on Napkin, by no bagles, well, it starts out like an angry ramble then turns into a love poem!! what can I say, I love the way this guy writes, I really do. I would make one suggestion, maybe add an S to crumble? I know it was written in haste, on a napkin, no less, but that one word stumbled me a tad
...I kneel to mould
from your imprints
in sand
or in mud
replicas
in gold
of your pure
perfection
more wondrous
than fiction...
~~~
Left Behind, by bluerains is a short poem, contemplating the fate of a ghost left behind. I had that experience once, when we moved here, we tried to get out ghost to come with us, but she either wouldnt, or couldnt. I like this poem, blue, very good work
~~~
still they are gone, by annaswirls
... below river-bed deep in silent labor
lifting rocks rebuilding storm-worn banks
filling hollows unable to stop our attempts ...
anna can switch for tease, to temptress to serious as all get out and I like when she throws me something i dont always get on first read. This poem sort of like that
~~~
Sierra Rose this poem, is so filled with emotion I felt my heart drop at the end, wow, it left me feeling and I love that feeling. Excellent work, DA,
~~~~
well if I had to pick a favorite, I couldnt do it, so I wont even try. I thought I was stuck with 4 audio poems today that I couldnt even hear and then got so many wonderful pieces to read. I truly enjoy this when there is so much to choose from sooo, if I missed any that need a mention, feel free, as always, I am not perfect and do not strive to be, I am maria, and I am, just me
happy writing Poets, and have a lovely day!~! xoxoxoxoxo
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