oOScarletWingsOo
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I have an Erotic Couplings category story that needs a once over. The piece is just under 1,500 words.
I need someone to catch typos, grammar errors and to provide general feedback on the piece over all.
A snippet is as follows:
When I walked into my bedroom, Chance was waiting for me wearing only his boxers. I had on my favorite flowing skirt and a blouse in a deep purple that made the flowers in the skirt more pronounced. It was cold in the room. I felt my nipples harden and hoped Chance noticed.
“Have you been waiting long?” I asked.
“No.”
“I’ll just go into the bathroom and change then we can sit here and talk.” I don’t know why I was pretending. We both knew that we were not going to talk. We might have shared some details of our day, but the moment our skin touched all conversation would cease.
My stories are here:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=564712&page=submissions
Please PM me with your contact info and required format for me to submit the piece to you.
Thanks in advance.
I need someone to catch typos, grammar errors and to provide general feedback on the piece over all.
A snippet is as follows:
When I walked into my bedroom, Chance was waiting for me wearing only his boxers. I had on my favorite flowing skirt and a blouse in a deep purple that made the flowers in the skirt more pronounced. It was cold in the room. I felt my nipples harden and hoped Chance noticed.
“Have you been waiting long?” I asked.
“No.”
“I’ll just go into the bathroom and change then we can sit here and talk.” I don’t know why I was pretending. We both knew that we were not going to talk. We might have shared some details of our day, but the moment our skin touched all conversation would cease.
My stories are here:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=564712&page=submissions
Please PM me with your contact info and required format for me to submit the piece to you.
Thanks in advance.
