ericrodman101
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Cock ring
I like the idea that he must participate in the blowbanging, otherwise what's in it for him? I also like the idea that she remembers something he is wearing. Make it a cock ring so she is prompted whenever he has his cock in her face. It could be something unusual, maybe a silver cock ring and that is what protects him from simply becoming her cum whore.
Well, the story plot I've had in mind is similar to Let the Right One In but with of or above age characters. Not a verbatim copy, but maybe you'll see what I mean...
The main protagonist (first person POV, I was thinking) is a college-aged male. He may or may not be a virgin. His biggest character flaw is that he's lazy and apathetic. Parents aren't thrilled. Maybe he dropped out of college to work at GameStop. If you're familiar with the lyrics to Prince's "Raspberry Beret," he's that guy ("...busy doing something close to nothing, but different than the day before...")
He's working (not really) at his job when the cumpire walks in. From there it progresses to a date that ends with a blowjob. To her he is nothing more than another hot meal, but after receiving the best suck-off one can experience he is naturally intrigued. So our hero asks around and eventually tracks her down to a warehouse. Now it's clearly the same girl, but she looks different, aged badly in certain light. Lines on the face, hair now frigid white. She's also in the middle of a hard, heavy blowbang. Male watches with amazement and confusion as the cumpire swallows a load that turns her hair jet black again. Holy shit! End of chapter one?
The cumpire is not pleased that the male protagonist has found her. In typical fashion, she warns him that he must stay away. She's a vampire, after all, sort of, and her lifestyle will bring him to nothing but misery. As it turns out, the cumpire suffers from amnesia. She can't recall her origins, but something the male character is wearing, a necklace, a ring, some kind of family heirloom, triggers a memory within her. It's like a key that unlocks a thing. Still brainstorming possibilities. She decides to keep our hero around until she can discover her true identity. From there the male and the cumpire travel together, sharing several mystical erotic adventures. He's good to have around for a snack; at other times he has to arrange for the cumpire to get a full course buffet. He gets to participate too of course. Jealously might be a conflict that arises later. Also, it may get sorta meta at the end. I was also thinking about a chapter where the cumpire is serviced by a forest of futas (the kind that can morph their clits into giant squirty dicks.)
I like the idea that he must participate in the blowbanging, otherwise what's in it for him? I also like the idea that she remembers something he is wearing. Make it a cock ring so she is prompted whenever he has his cock in her face. It could be something unusual, maybe a silver cock ring and that is what protects him from simply becoming her cum whore.