jimmyg1999ms
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Hello,
Please give me your opinion good or bad. I want to know if I should continue writing or at least finishing this story. I am open to anything. I would like to improve my writing skills. I apologize if it should be in another place.
This is the beginning of a mom/son story where she eventually teaches him how to please a woman in every way.
This is all imaginary. All characters are over 18.
The first time I thought about her sexually was when I walked in on her and my step-dad. Her shorts and panties were on the floor around her ankles. I saw her nicely formed ass. She was working her way down his chest. He saw me but she did not. He did something I never will forget and I know he wanted me to see. He slowly moved his hand up to his lips and gave me the sign to be quiet.
He then guided her down and she began to lick his cock. He placed his hand at the side of her head which blocked her view of me standing in the doorway. She turned sideways a bit and I saw her big dark patch of hair. That is why to this day I love hairy pussy. She worked on his hard cock and sucked more and more. She focused on his cock head for a bit then I heard his cock pop from the suction as she pulled off his cock. All of this time he is telling her that she is doing great and I hear him moan a bit. He is smiling directly at me as he begins to fuck her mouth. He is careful not to let her catch a glimpse of me and I hear her slobbering all over his hard cock.
He then pulls her back onto the bed on her stomach and lifts her mid-section up so that her ass is up in the air. He pulls off her shorts and panties the rest of the way and shifts her so that her ass is facing me. She has no idea that I am watching a live porn show and he is making her the star. He takes a seat on the bed next to her and spreads her ass cheeks apart and I see her fur pie. He then spreads her pussy moving the hair out of the way so I can get a good view of her pussy. With his fingers at each edge he pulls her lips apart and I see her glistening pussy hole. He probed her pussy with his finger and when he pulls it out I can see the wetness. He uses the wetness to lube her clit and begins stroking her clit and I hear her beginning to moan. He then begins to slobber all over her clit and pussy. He was eating her like a starving man. He sucked her clit and pussy lips and then she finally told him to fuck her. He motioned for me to get out of the room. I carefully did so and I left with my memories of what I had just witnessed.
Please give me your opinion good or bad. I want to know if I should continue writing or at least finishing this story. I am open to anything. I would like to improve my writing skills. I apologize if it should be in another place.
This is the beginning of a mom/son story where she eventually teaches him how to please a woman in every way.
This is all imaginary. All characters are over 18.
The first time I thought about her sexually was when I walked in on her and my step-dad. Her shorts and panties were on the floor around her ankles. I saw her nicely formed ass. She was working her way down his chest. He saw me but she did not. He did something I never will forget and I know he wanted me to see. He slowly moved his hand up to his lips and gave me the sign to be quiet.
He then guided her down and she began to lick his cock. He placed his hand at the side of her head which blocked her view of me standing in the doorway. She turned sideways a bit and I saw her big dark patch of hair. That is why to this day I love hairy pussy. She worked on his hard cock and sucked more and more. She focused on his cock head for a bit then I heard his cock pop from the suction as she pulled off his cock. All of this time he is telling her that she is doing great and I hear him moan a bit. He is smiling directly at me as he begins to fuck her mouth. He is careful not to let her catch a glimpse of me and I hear her slobbering all over his hard cock.
He then pulls her back onto the bed on her stomach and lifts her mid-section up so that her ass is up in the air. He pulls off her shorts and panties the rest of the way and shifts her so that her ass is facing me. She has no idea that I am watching a live porn show and he is making her the star. He takes a seat on the bed next to her and spreads her ass cheeks apart and I see her fur pie. He then spreads her pussy moving the hair out of the way so I can get a good view of her pussy. With his fingers at each edge he pulls her lips apart and I see her glistening pussy hole. He probed her pussy with his finger and when he pulls it out I can see the wetness. He uses the wetness to lube her clit and begins stroking her clit and I hear her beginning to moan. He then begins to slobber all over her clit and pussy. He was eating her like a starving man. He sucked her clit and pussy lips and then she finally told him to fuck her. He motioned for me to get out of the room. I carefully did so and I left with my memories of what I had just witnessed.