greenmountaineer
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As others have done and Tess plans to do, I too have been thinking about a consolidated thread of poems submitted, mostly those posted in "New Poems" through the years. Actually, I had been thinking about it a lot during Tzara's "Weekly Challenge."
I'm surprised and sometimes a bit embarrassed when I re-visit a poem I thought was well constructed when I submitted it, only to discover what I should seen as a deficiency in the first place, whether it was forced diction, the wrong grammatical tense, or any number of other problems in the poem.
The poets I most respect on Literotica are the frequent posters in PF&D. Most of you have already commented on whatever poem I post here in the future, and in some cases your feedback contributed to the edited version. Don't feel it's necessary to comment further or even read additions to this thread for that matter, but if you do, constructive feedback is always welcome.
I'm surprised and sometimes a bit embarrassed when I re-visit a poem I thought was well constructed when I submitted it, only to discover what I should seen as a deficiency in the first place, whether it was forced diction, the wrong grammatical tense, or any number of other problems in the poem.
The poets I most respect on Literotica are the frequent posters in PF&D. Most of you have already commented on whatever poem I post here in the future, and in some cases your feedback contributed to the edited version. Don't feel it's necessary to comment further or even read additions to this thread for that matter, but if you do, constructive feedback is always welcome.