Mello_SixtyNine
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Hi guys,
First post. I discovered the site a few months ago, and was inspired to submit a story. I recently submitted my first story to Literotica.com (Baxter's Plan). And when I say first story, I mean literally, this is the first story I have ever written in my life. I was not an english major in college so I was really winging it.
As I read the comments, I noticed two consistent things that posters didn't like about my story:
1) They didn't like how the story bounced between first & third person perspective.
2) Some posters really did not like the idea of the main character having a 12 1/2 inch penis. They said it was unbelievable.
I should have clarified at the beginning of my story that I was not writing a memoir or historical document. I did do a Google search though and found a guy named Jonah Falcon. The dude has a 13 1/2 inch cock (9 inch when flaccid). So technically, my story was still one inch in the realm of possibilty.
The reason I'm writing this post though is to request anyone to post some literotica.com story links of great stories that are completely written in first person perspective and great stories that are completely in third person.
I'm currently in the middle of my second story and I'd like to use these links as a reference. (I'm going to stick with writing about hugely hung guys fucking unrealistically hot twins though. I gotta be me! )
Thanks!
First post. I discovered the site a few months ago, and was inspired to submit a story. I recently submitted my first story to Literotica.com (Baxter's Plan). And when I say first story, I mean literally, this is the first story I have ever written in my life. I was not an english major in college so I was really winging it.
As I read the comments, I noticed two consistent things that posters didn't like about my story:
1) They didn't like how the story bounced between first & third person perspective.
2) Some posters really did not like the idea of the main character having a 12 1/2 inch penis. They said it was unbelievable.
I should have clarified at the beginning of my story that I was not writing a memoir or historical document. I did do a Google search though and found a guy named Jonah Falcon. The dude has a 13 1/2 inch cock (9 inch when flaccid). So technically, my story was still one inch in the realm of possibilty.
The reason I'm writing this post though is to request anyone to post some literotica.com story links of great stories that are completely written in first person perspective and great stories that are completely in third person.
I'm currently in the middle of my second story and I'd like to use these links as a reference. (I'm going to stick with writing about hugely hung guys fucking unrealistically hot twins though. I gotta be me! )
Thanks!
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