butters
High on a Hill
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now that's some side-step from your usual manner of writing . . . i had to look twice to see if it was one of mine*The gift of poetry*
such an oddity,
this expression of thought
in a mote of sparseness,
a metaphor for sex,
metaphors that vex,
rhymes and dimes,
that run and chime
en-
jambing lines to
make thoughts jump
skip, head to
dip
a trick of phrase to
trace a maze in the mind,
a world still
full of colour
a play on meaning,
interpreted screaming's
visual dreams in ethereal
schemes it seems
your gift of poetry is odd
as is mine to you
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