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Wintermute01 said:
Hopefully these are better:

Deviance
~~~~~~
As you kneel right here, I show you my love
And give to you, such a delightful pain.
Beautiful you are, when viewed from above
As you kneel right here I show you, my love.
Because I'm the left and you're the right glove
Our bodies will sing, to a shared refrain.
As you kneel right here I show you my, love?
And give to you such a, delightful, pain.

Together
~~~~~~
Your words haunt me, taking over my mind,
Those marks on a page, to which I add sound,
Comfort my heart making me feel complete.

The pictures you paint, in prose so complete.
Those imagined scenes, your words bring to mind,
Fill me with warmth so I feel safe and sound.

So let me repay you with my own sound.
Please give me the chance, to make you complete.
Together we'll write, with thoughts from one Mind.

One mind, one sound and together, complete.
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now you've got it well done :)
 
Wintermute01 said:
Hopefully these are better:

Deviance
~~~~~~
As you kneel right here, I show you my love
And give to you, such a delightful pain.
Beautiful you are, when viewed from above
As you kneel right here I show you, my love.
Because I'm the left and you're the right glove
Our bodies will sing, to a shared refrain.
As you kneel right here I show you my, love?
And give to you such a, delightful, pain.

Together
~~~~~~
Your words haunt me, taking over my mind,
Those marks on a page, to which I add sound,
Comfort my heart making me feel complete.

The pictures you paint, in prose so complete.
Those imagined scenes, your words bring to mind,
Fill me with warmth so I feel safe and sound.

So let me repay you with my own sound.
Please give me the chance, to make you complete.
Together we'll write, with thoughts from one Mind.

One mind, one sound and together, complete.
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That tritina, especially, is lovely. :)
 
A Farmhand's First Sexual Encounter

After I was done with my chores, I walked into the barn,
Took off my shirt and laid myself down on some hay
Before I took a deep breath and fell into a deep sleep.

But that was before I felt something interrupting my sleep
Which made me open my eyes and see someone else in the barn
Without a top on and rolling around in the hay.

"I want you to do it! I want you to fuck me in all this hay!
And I want you to do it even if you feel like going back to sleep!",
Said Sue Ellen before we got ourselves naked inside that barn.

And after that fucking in the barn and on the hay, we went to sleep.
 
How Tiffany Gave It To Me

It was after a concert that my sister wanted from Tiffany
An autograph and asked me to go to her hotel room
And get that autograph for her without any problem.

After I got into the suite without any hint of a problem,
I saw naked on the bed the beautiful singer Tiffany,
Who smiled and said, "I see you found my room."

That was when I also got naked in that room
And was able to fuck that bitch without any problem
Before she gave me a napkin that said, "Love, Tiffany."

That is how Tiffany gave it to me in her room with no problem.
 
One Who Shares My Love For Chopin

It was on New Year's Eve when I saw Denise
Wearing that wonderful red gown for the first time and
My heart started pounding out the Minute Waltz by Chopin.

And when we found out that we both enjoy Chopin,
I gave myself the courage to introduce myself to Denise.

Then, after everyone else all counted down to Midnight and
Sang Auld Lang Syne, we left the Waldorf Astoria and
Joined the other New Yorkers in Times Square where Chopin
Was being played and I was able to kiss Denise.

On that night, I enjoyed both Denise and Frederic Chopin.
 
Life Is Just Too Good

Life is just too good
For someone like me working
Over at the Giant Eagle.

I just want to be like an actual eagle
And fly away for good
In order to find some serious working.

Then again, I happen to like working
Over at the Giant Eagle
Where the pay and hours are always good.

Yes, I'm good with working at the Giant Eagle.
 
Who I Saw At The Dude Ranch

I was the only single guy celebrating Valentine's Day on
A dude ranch filled with couples until I met her.

Her denim top was open to expose her huge tits.

And when I walked over to help cover those tits,
She looked up, took my hands and placed them on
Her shoulders before she smiled and made me kiss her.

After that, we got naked and I started fucking her
soaking wet pussy and sucking on her magnificent huge tits
While enjoying the soft ground that we were laying on
Before I was on top of a girl with more than tits on her.
 
Hm. This thread is very interesting, and a real challenge to one such as me, who just writes whatever. I will return soon(ish) and try one of these.
 
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I Was Wondering When You Would Get Home

It was after I got home from a full day
Of work that I saw my neighbor Valerie's door open.

And when I walked in, she was on a chair
Naked and fingering herself without doing damage to the chair
Before she looked at me with her smile of the day
And shown me how wide her legs were open.

She had put on a robe but left it slightly open
Before I got naked and sat down on the chair
And we fucked each other for the remainder of the day.

The next day, I left the door open and sat naked on the chair.
 
Made A New Sex Toy Out Of Me

It was when she got home from work that Lori
Got ready to take a shower before she saw me
Sitting on her daughter's bed and waiting to be held.

That was when she picked me up and I was being held
Against the firm breasts of her bare chest that Lori
Carried me into her bedroom and made a new sex toy out of me.

After she fingered herself and stared directly at me,
She placed me inbetween her legs and held
On to me while I was being rubbed against the pussy of Lori.

That was before Lori returned me to her daughter's room without being held.
 
On Our Way Home

As soon as it started to rain, we got into the car
And asked Philip to drive us home before we saw how soaking wet
We were and decided to take off our clothes and let them dry.

That was before I saw that Diane's vagina was no longer dry
Before she leaned closer and started sucking my penis in that car
While Philip was still driving on a road that the rain was making wet.

Then, after I fucked her in the ass, I had done the same thing to her wet
Pussy before we heard Philip say, "Go ahead! Do it! Fuck that bitch dry!",
Which made both Diane and me share a laugh in that car.

Then, we got out of the car in our wet clothes and into the house that is dry.
 
Tsotha said:
Hm. This thread is very interesting, and a real challenge to one such as me, who just writes whatever. I will return soon(ish) and try one of these.

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You certainly couldn't do any worse than Runningonblade and his porn, which is getting stale and was always boring. As a matter of interest where I come from if someone is 'Running on' it means they are talking a load of rubbish and at great length, which is rather apt
 
UnderYourSpell said:
You certainly couldn't do any worse than Runningonblade and his porn, which is getting stale and was always boring. As a matter of interest where I come from if someone is 'Running on' it means they are talking a load of rubbish and at great length, which is rather apt
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Well... I'm still trying to figure this part out:

All lines should be of a common meter or length.

Do you mean number of syllables? Same metre style throughout? I really can't tell whether I'm doing the stressed / unstressed marking wrong, or if the examples I'm seeing simply don't follow the metre they're supposed to be using... :(
 
Tsotha said:
Well... I'm still trying to figure this part out:

All lines should be of a common meter or length.

Do you mean number of syllables? Same metre style throughout? I really can't tell whether I'm doing the stressed / unstressed marking wrong, or if the examples I'm seeing simply don't follow the metre they're supposed to be using... :(
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I believe it means either.

For example,

"There once was a man from Nantucket," is a line I'm sure we've all heard. If you used it for a basis for one of these poems then you would either shoot for every line having the same nine syllables, or else that was constructed using the same meter. (ie, built with stresses along the lines of u l u u l l u u l)

(And, my ear for stresses is also semi-unreliable, so the beats may not be marked correctly, but you get my gist, yes?;))

:cool:
 
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Remec said:
I believe it means either.

For example,

"There once was a man from Nantucket," is a line I'm sure we've all heard. If you used it for a basis for one of these poems then you would either shoot for every line having the same nine syllables, or else that was constructed using the same meter. (ie, built with stresses along the lines of u l u u l l u u l)

(And, my ear for stresses is also semi-unreliable, so the beats may not be marked correctly, but you get my gist, yes?;))

:cool:
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Thanks, Remec — it definitely helps. I can count the syllables, but metre is beyond my ability, because I have no idea if I'm doing the stress marking correctly. :eek:

I apologize in advance for this... I just couldn't resist. :D

Secret Garden

a Wandering, lost in a secret garden,
b I brave forth, lured by scents oh-so-fragrant.
c Unbeknown to me, the muse comes alive.

c Horrors must be faced to leave here alive,
a for this is the famous Zombie Garden.
b And one musn't trust what's luscious and fragrant!

b Yet her garden is tended, and fragrant...
c she opens herself, quite sweet and alive.
a We tumble, and soon I'll be of the garden —

abc This foul garden, fragrant but not alive.

I should probably have written an erotic horror story instead. :rolleyes:
 
I Made Out With My Professor

I made out with my professor because I'm sexy as fuck
And even though she is my teacher and I'm just a student,
We keep our relationship going without the college finding out.

One day, all of the other students got up and stepped out
Of the room before she locked the door and said, "Okay. Let's fuck.",
Which made me watch her get naked in front of her favorite student.

After she sucked my dick, I showed that blond bitch what this student
Of hers could really do by shoving my huge cock in and out
Of her wet pussy until we came and she said, "You're such a great fuck."

After that, I let her fuck this student in and out of the classroom.
 
Gloom, a Triolet

A Resist this mood when winter comes;
B If lacking strength, by will endure.
a Hold on to friends, though night comes faster -
A Resist this mood! - when winter comes,
a their fire can keep at bay disaster.
b Though night has ways to lie and lure,
A Resist this mood. When winter comes,
B If lacking strength, by will endure.

This might be of interest to others who are learning:

Full sentences, without enjambment:
Resist this mood when winter comes; if lacking strength, by will endure.
Hold on to friends, though night comes faster - resist this mood! — when winter comes, their fire can keep at bay disaster.
Though night has ways to lie and lure, resist this mood.
When winter comes, If lacking strength, by will endure.

Iambic tetrameter stressed/unstressed markup:
A: res·IST | this MOOD | when WIN|ter COMES
B: if LACK|ing STRENGTH | by WILL | en·DURE
a(1): hold ON | to FRIENDS | though NIGHT | comes FAST|ter
a(2): their FIRE | can KEEP | at BAY | dis·AS|ter
b: though NIGHT | has WAYS | to LIE | and LURE

Note: lines a(1) and a(2) have feminine rhymes.

Please note that I'm not absolutely sure that the above is correct, but it seems so to me. :)
 
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Tsotha said:
Gloom, a Triolet

A Resist this mood when winter comes;
B If lacking strength, by will endure.
a Hold on to friends, though night comes faster -
A Resist this mood! - when winter comes,
a their fire can keep at bay disaster.
b Though night has ways to lie and lure,
A Resist this mood. When winter comes,
B If lacking strength, by will endure.

This might be of interest to others who are learning:

Full sentences, without enjambment:
Resist this mood when winter comes; if lacking strength, by will endure.
Hold on to friends, though night comes faster - resist this mood! — when winter comes, their fire can keep at bay disaster.
Though night has ways to lie and lure, resist this mood.
When winter comes, If lacking strength, by will endure.

Iambic tetrameter stressed/unstressed markup:
A: res·IST | this MOOD | when WIN|ter COMES
B: if LACK|ing STRENGTH | by WILL | en·DURE
a(1): hold ON | to FRIENDS | though NIGHT | comes FAST|ter
a(2): their FIRE | can KEEP | at BAY | dis·AS|ter
b: though NIGHT | has WAYS | to LIE | and LURE

Note: lines a(1) and a(2) have feminine rhymes.

Please note that I'm not absolutely sure that the above is correct, but it seems so to me. :)
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Each to their own but it worries me that you are so well mathematical and analytical about this. I write by how it sounds and flows in my head, if I have to analyse poetry it ceases to be.
 
UnderYourSpell said:
Each to their own but it worries me that you are so well mathematical and analytical about this. I write by how it sounds and flows in my head, if I have to analyse poetry it ceases to be.
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Haha. Yes, ok... I see what you mean. However, I'd say it is more an effect of there being an overlap with me trying to learn metre. I normally write free form. So this may be me overcompensating for what I see as a deficiency in my writing (lack of any technique). It should normalize soon. ;)

Did you feel the poem was too well-behaved, then? To be honest, I didn't make much of a compromise between what I intended to write and how it came out — though I did modify a few words to make iambic feet, at times.
 
Consumed

His lust for her consumes his days and nights
Captive of unattained karnal desires
Yearning for the slightest recognition
His lust for her consumes his days and nights
Won her in eternal matrimony
Assumptions unfold of abiding bliss
His lust for her consumes his days and nights
Captive of unattained karnal desires
 
well, I begun ok, I thought, but my brain went another way. I have no discipline to stick to the form. Still I found it good practice, kicking off my lazy habits, and entertaining.

A FAILED TRIOLET

I'd rather be with brains to let,
With memory of a gold fish,
Than seat and write a triolet,
Conceptualizing your kiss.
This form to it would be inept,
Fair go I give it but I miss,
What it was like I don't forget,
It had no form, it was a bliss.
 
A triolet of missing words

these things you took, they are all that I have.
(. . .)
take care what you do with them; I beg you, please,
these things you took, they are all that I have.
give me friendship, and patience; don't let me freeze,
don't let me be misunderstood, nor force me to lie.
these things you took, they were all that I had.
(. . .)

There you go, Annie... This one should be suitably un-mathematical. :)
 
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