BMF's Urban Hang Suite

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I ate a couple of pieces, but then threw all the rest in the teachers lounge. Can't have that stuff sitting in my desk! So, you were somebody's Valentine....good for you. ;)

You should've kept it. Never know when you'll need it for a rainy day.

Thanks! :D
 
Well, I am off to bed. Thanks for keeping me company for a while. You take care. Until the next time, Rae
 
sup, b? i've been away from here too long. so many people dropping great lines of verse. i saw that convo about indexing and hope you can figure it out. it's really difficult to locate these great works when i want to. it would great to just be able to click a link and see any one i wanted. not only your stuff, but others too. like i said, so many talented people put things up in here.
 
sup, b? i've been away from here too long. so many people dropping great lines of verse. i saw that convo about indexing and hope you can figure it out. it's really difficult to locate these great works when i want to. it would great to just be able to click a link and see any one i wanted. not only your stuff, but others too. like i said, so many talented people put things up in here.

I'm hoping he'll leave my silly ones out.
 
Why

Why did I think I could be a part of your world
trying to fit in someplace I don't belong

Maybe I am just trying to fit in somewhere
seeking a place I feel comfortable

For a moment I thought I had a chance
to be your friend, share my thoughts

Then the insecurities took over
as I counted the differences

I feel like I am on the outside looking in
at a place I want to be but can't

It may be all in my head and I think
my fears are contorting my mind once again

But for now, it is my reality....
amazing what perception does

Why did I think I could be a part of your world
trying to fit in someplace I don't belong.....

*claps* Very nice! :kiss:
 
Here's my offering for the day...

"Oral Intent"

Teeth sinking deeply
Ripping and gripping
Getting and grinding
While I'm perched behind.
Neck soft and tender
Giving into greet me
Hands forcing head sideways
To gain more leverage.
Lips pressed tightly
Suction increasing
Nibbling nerve endings
Taste buds sending
Flavor explosions through my brain stem.
Cerebral dynamite
Lighting up my mental skies
Causing quite a rising
Thats now pressing between your thighs.
Sloping towards your shoulders
Neck bruised and purple
Fang holes draining
Vamp entertaining.
Twin peaks calling
Nips bold and brave
Unable to be saved,
As teeth trek towards em.
 
Why

Why did I think I could be a part of your world
trying to fit in someplace I don't belong

Maybe I am just trying to fit in somewhere
seeking a place I feel comfortable

For a moment I thought I had a chance
to be your friend, share my thoughts

Then the insecurities took over
as I counted the differences

I feel like I am on the outside looking in
at a place I want to be but can't

It may be all in my head and I think
my fears are contorting my mind once again

But for now, it is my reality....
amazing what perception does

Why did I think I could be a part of your world
trying to fit in someplace I don't belong.....

This is sad...melancholy. I can sing this to a blues track. Anybody got a piano?
 
sup, b? i've been away from here too long. so many people dropping great lines of verse. i saw that convo about indexing and hope you can figure it out. it's really difficult to locate these great works when i want to. it would great to just be able to click a link and see any one i wanted. not only your stuff, but others too. like i said, so many talented people put things up in here.

I'd been thinking about this too. I'm probably gonna give it a try pretty soon.
 
Flame Thrower

I’m drawn to you like a moth to a flame,
You warn of burning,
And maybe I’m insane,
But when I feel your heat meet me,
Its sweetly, without harm
I’m warmed completely.
Even before I knew you,
I felt headed toward you
Some invisible force pulling
Tugging me closer.
Felt like a rope around my lips,
Yours as the target.
Inflamed fingertips longing to linger innocently.
Intimately intimating intentioned isolations
Bated breaths whispering a desired designation
Connected before courtesy to introduce a simple name
Yet yours bounced around,
Lost like marbles in my brain.
Maybe for you, sometimes the same
Perhaps I’m lodged inside you,
My magnetism calling, feeling forces undeniably
Determining that certain thoughts unavoidably
Return your mind to me?

Here’s hoping that the flame works both ways.
The same ways, the same daze,
Induced by your influenced intoxication,
Maybe it soon hits you
And you feel a J sensation.
Perhaps you feel the haze descending even as we’re friendly
And feel yourself wobbly, maybe kind of bendy.
Maybe even you want me,
And its perpetually.
Constant yearning deep within for the extraordinary.
Yet, even as your may vary,
I’m still drawn to you.
Reciprocity relinquished, relishing relations
Your flame thrower pulling
Piercing my life.
 
I’m drawn to you like a moth to a flame,
You warn of burning,
And maybe I’m insane,
But when I feel your heat meet me,
Its sweetly, without harm
I’m warmed completely.
Even before I knew you,
I felt headed toward you
Some invisible force pulling
Tugging me closer.
Felt like a rope around my lips,
Yours as the target.
Inflamed fingertips longing to linger innocently.
Intimately intimating intentioned isolations
Bated breaths whispering a desired designation
Connected before courtesy to introduce a simple name
Yet yours bounced around,
Lost like marbles in my brain.
Maybe for you, sometimes the same
Perhaps I’m lodged inside you,
My magnetism calling, feeling forces undeniably
Determining that certain thoughts unavoidably
Return your mind to me?

Here’s hoping that the flame works both ways.
The same ways, the same daze,
Induced by your influenced intoxication,
Maybe it soon hits you
And you feel a J sensation.
Perhaps you feel the haze descending even as we’re friendly
And feel yourself wobbly, maybe kind of bendy.
Maybe even you want me,
And its perpetually.
Constant yearning deep within for the extraordinary.
Yet, even as your may vary,
I’m still drawn to you.
Reciprocity relinquished, relishing relations
Your flame thrower pulling
Piercing my life.

For lack of a better term, you're on fire tonight BMF.
 
Freestyle 3 (Thrill of the Chase)

Just give me your love,
Stop running, its doing no good
Just making me chase harder.
No wonders if I should
Be right here with you,
This ish feels right
I should be the man beside you
When you're sleeping at night.
My hands should be around you,
My lips should be on yours
My eyes should be the ones staring holes
That make you pour.
My skin should be mixing
With you, because I'm missing
What's yours,
And what's mine wants to be
Making you wiggle.
You giggle just a little
But don't worry, I' won't be gentle
This chemistry we've been building
Is growing a bit unstable.
Are you able to handle me?
I'm bringing the fire in spades
If you don't mind a little burn
Then I'd love for us to play.

But I don't just want your body
I wanna play in your mind.
I want to hear your soul singing out loud
That you're mine.
I want each thought you have to be based on this premise
That you can't get enough of me
Cause I bring you bliss.
I won't quit till you wish that
Each whisper from the wind
Could send me love letters
And make my mind spin.
I don't just wanna conquer you,
Baby I wanna win.
But first, you gotta stop running
Open wide, and let me in.
 
To follow the theme....


The Truth Shall Set You Free or Set You on Fire

Why does it always seem
The truth I tell should set me free
Instead it’s setting fire to me
I open my mouth and instantly regret
Releasing the words; let’s just forget
I said one fucking word

Why does it always seem
The truth I tell will set me free
Then burns me down so callously
I close my mouth and instantly regret
Concealing the words; let’s just forget
Whatever I just fucking said….

Why does it always seem
The truth is so much worse?
Why does it always seem
To be less of a blessing
And more of a curse?

Well I’ve learned one thing
The taste to truth is great it’s said,
But all I taste is ash and lead…
 
To follow the theme....


The Truth Shall Set You Free or Set You on Fire

Why does it always seem
The truth I tell should set me free
Instead it’s setting fire to me
I open my mouth and instantly regret
Releasing the words; let’s just forget
I said one fucking word

Why does it always seem
The truth I tell will set me free
Then burns me down so callously
I close my mouth and instantly regret
Concealing the words; let’s just forget
Whatever I just fucking said….

Why does it always seem
The truth is so much worse?
Why does it always seem
To be less of a blessing
And more of a curse?

Well I’ve learned one thing
The taste to truth is great it’s said,
But all I taste is ash and lead…

Lol. You're quite awesome with a pen, dude. Wow. I love those last 3 lines.
 
Honey, love, love, love the new av!

BMF, wonderful "daily offerings". Very hot and sexy, just like the man who penned them.

Mr. L, WOW! Where did that come from? How many times I have said that to myself, yet you manage to word those thoughts so well and as BMF said, the last 3 lines are great.
 
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