BMF's Urban Hang Suite

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I remembered how much I liked this one..

Trembling hands trekking across
Softly treated skin…
Barely touching here and there
Yet feeling sparks within.
Shallow breathing echoing
Within a tingling ear
Fragrance rising like a mist
And softly fills the air.
Flickered lights from candles
Jump and dance against the walls
Lighting faces unaware
That they are being watched.
Music plays in waves
Crashing up against our shore
Harmonies entangling
Yet, beckoning for more.
Kisses planted, kisses left
Then kisses back for seconds
Kisses searching, Kisses finding
Kissing buried treasure.
Roaming hands, no longer shake
But travel confidently.
Curious what might be found
By searching over and beneath thee.
Bodies spinning, wrestling
Bodies flying high
Dangling and tangling
Both bodies slowly die.
Bodies bang, then bodies jerk
Then bodies hit the floor.
Yet neither body leaves
Until both bodies have some more.
First me, then you
Then you, then me
Then us, then we
Becoming
Then I kiss you, as you taste me
Our minds begin to wonder
What happens in between the lines
Only our minds should ponder.
If dreams can meet between the sheets
Then surely, you will feel me
As I fill you
…and you fill me…
With enough to drive us under.
 
I’ve always liked clothing and what it concealed
But the secrets yours told,
Hit me harder than steel…
Your slow strip tease, pleased more than the eye
My eye,
Still stuck on your beautiful thigh
My eye,
Still staring as the pictures roll by
My lips,
Tingling thinking of tasting
Your ooey goodness.
My lips,
Kind of drooling, maybe I need some retooling.
Your states of undress, have left me mind vexed.
Thinking of how I best could flex your assets.
And get your music playing like an orchestral number.
I’m staring even now in an otherworldly wonder.
It’s hard not to ponder
Or put wicked thoughts asunder
When I’m steadily going under
Committing lyrical blunders.
I’d compare you, but I can’t
To anything, there’s none like you
Body with enough star power
To light a dark room.
Personality so real, gritty
But then too,
So lady like
That it strikes me, and my plight’s doomed.
What man could deny you?
Not me, cause I’d be
Wrapped so tight around you
You’d be fighting just to breathe.
Kidding of course,
But this won’t see the light of day too.
Don’t know you,
But I think you,
Are worth a few lines, boo.
 
I’ve always liked clothing and what it concealed
But the secrets yours told,
Hit me harder than steel…
Your slow strip tease, pleased more than the eye
My eye,
Still stuck on your beautiful thigh
My eye,
Still staring as the pictures roll by
My lips,
Tingling thinking of tasting
Your ooey goodness.
My lips,
Kind of drooling, maybe I need some retooling.
Your states of undress, have left me mind vexed.
Thinking of how I best could flex your assets.
And get your music playing like an orchestral number.
I’m staring even now in an otherworldly wonder.
It’s hard not to ponder
Or put wicked thoughts asunder
When I’m steadily going under
Committing lyrical blunders.
I’d compare you, but I can’t
To anything, there’s none like you
Body with enough star power
To light a dark room.
Personality so real, gritty
But then too,
So lady like
That it strikes me, and my plight’s doomed.
What man could deny you?
Not me, cause I’d be
Wrapped so tight around you
You’d be fighting just to breathe.
Kidding of course,
But this won’t see the light of day too.
Don’t know you,
But I think you,
Are worth a few lines, boo.

I like the story this tells. So eloquent, so classy!

Hope you're well.
 
Good Evening BMF and other "Suiters"

I hope everyone had a good day:)

and well Happy Pre Valentine's night:rolleyes: lol
 
Gonna post this on Tek's thread too. Happy Valentine's Day to all of you poets, and otherwise! I'd love to read some awesome verse from you all tomorrow, regardless of how you feel about the day.

The Question

As I said before...hope like love is out there and for those looking I hope the door will open and the answer will be yes....
 
Happy Valentine's Day to all of you. Have a great day, and show somebody love.
 
True Belief

Some don't, but I do.
Even though sometimes unrequited,
When pain blots my eyelids with tears.
When I'd rather die than face the day,
When it physically aches.
Even when my mind imagines
Things happening
And even reality seeks to take those
Very thoughts away from me,
I still believe.

Some don't, but I do.
Even those who say it fails.
I dismiss those doubter with nary a word
Because its stronger than life
And its stronger than death.
I maintain the same thinking,
It rips reason in my brain.
It's people who fail to live up to that claim.
And to those who suggest
That lust alone is best
Try removing the sex
And then see how you're vexed
By the loneliness that sets in
Upon detaching your skin.
Minus this to stoke the coals
All you have is a...lone.
I still believe.

Some don't, but I do.
And I will.
I'll believe it for me,
And I shall for you.
It shall find us both, friend
Don't fret, don't give in to despair
That wants to make you think you don't care.
It's what we were created to experience
To give of ourselves,
And to never forget
That its worth it.
When all is said and done,
It makes life worth living.

So, yes...
I still believe.
Some don't, but I do.
And I'll believe it for me,
Just as I shall for you.
Love.
 
Some don't, but I do.
Even though sometimes unrequited,
When pain blots my eyelids with tears.
When I'd rather die than face the day,
When it physically aches.
Even when my mind imagines
Things happening
And even reality seeks to take those
Very thoughts away from me,
I still believe.

Some don't, but I do.
Even those who say it fails.
I dismiss those doubter with nary a word
Because its stronger than life
And its stronger than death.
I maintain the same thinking,
It rips reason in my brain.
It's people who fail to live up to that claim.
And to those who suggest
That lust alone is best
Try removing the sex
And then see how you're vexed
By the loneliness that sets in
Upon detaching your skin.
Minus this to stoke the coals
All you have is a...lone.
I still believe.

Some don't, but I do.
And I will.
I'll believe it for me,
And I shall for you.
It shall find us both, friend
Don't fret, don't give in to despair
That wants to make you think you don't care.
It's what we were created to experience
To give of ourselves,
And to never forget
That its worth it.
When all is said and done,
It makes life worth living.

So, yes...
I still believe.
Some don't, but I do.
And I'll believe it for me,
Just as I shall for you.
Love.

Happy Valentines day, my lovely!

:kiss: :kiss: :kiss:

Beautiful writing as always.
 
I will make more of a effort to pop in here and stay for a bit.

how are you on this lovely day?

I'm great. It's my mission to be a big heart for those who need love today. I love this day even though I'm single. LOL!! How are you?
 
Hey Suite peeps. I figured I'd post up one of my pieces about the day, as per BMF's request. It may be corny, and it's not my best, but here it is.

V-Day

Roses are crimson
Violets bleed cerulean and
Cyan too
Today our hearts will laugh and cry
As only they can do

Roses are carmine
Violets have sapphire hues
Today's the day for hearts to bleed
For joy and sorrow too

Roses are rouged
Violets are bruised
But today is the day that
Their beautiful symbolism shines through

So remember:
Roses are red
Violets are blue
Be wary of the bad things you've heard about this day
Cuz not all of them are true
 
I'm great. It's my mission to be a big heart for those who need love today. I love this day even though I'm single. LOL!! How are you?

That's the right attitude about today! I love it... I do like this day too.. I painted my nails red, wearing a nice lovey sweater... :D ( I only get a little sad that I have no one to snuggle with..!)

I'm doing good though.. just at placement.. bored out of my mind, holy!
 
Hey Suite peeps. I figured I'd post up one of my pieces about the day, as per BMF's request. It may be corny, and it's not my best, but here it is.

V-Day

Roses are crimson
Violets bleed cerulean and
Cyan too
Today our hearts will laugh and cry
As only they can do

Roses are carmine
Violets have sapphire hues
Today's the day for hearts to bleed
For joy and sorrow too

Roses are rouged
Violets are bruised
But today is the day that
Their beautiful symbolism shines through

So remember:
Roses are red
Violets are blue
Be wary of the bad things you've heard about this day
Cuz not all of them are true

Not corny at all. A different take on the much maligned roses are red line. Thanks.
 
That's the right attitude about today! I love it... I do like this day too.. I painted my nails red, wearing a nice lovey sweater... :D ( I only get a little sad that I have no one to snuggle with..!)

I'm doing good though.. just at placement.. bored out of my mind, holy!

No red for me but my wardrobe has no red. I'm glad you're good.
 
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