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My father was in the USMC and I wrote this when I was about 13, or 14...there were times when my father worked a 2nd job to be able to provide for us...and as such the "father-daughter" time was non existant.

Tomorrow night he'll play with me,
that's what the young girl said
As she slowly climbed the lonely stairs
and put herself to bed.

I know my daddy loves me
she kept saying in her head
He's such a very busy man
and he must work instead.

But somehow deep inside
she knew that it was true
that tomorrow wouldn't come
for the next day's busy too.

Still weeks pass by
and turn to years
The little girl is waiting
although it is with tears

The little girl has grown
and she has teenage fears
Oh why won't daddy talk with me
but this is all she hears

I'll talk with you tomorrow night
I'm awfully busy right now
I really want to talk to you
but can't find the time somehow

And so she climbs the stairs
Her tender heart so crushed
by all the years she was put off
by a daddy always rushed.

I can kind of relate to this. Thanks SD.
 
It's funny how one relationship is crumbling (husband) that I start to realise how much a source of strength my father is, and I'm thankful in recent years my relationship w/ him has grown.

Thank you BB :)

Your poem didn't just touch a nerve, it also made me wanna reach out to the little girl and give her a tight hug, tell her that all will be alright. (Oh jeebus! I think I felt my maternal instinct :eek: kicking in)! :D

You are much more fortunate than me, one of the luckier ones to still have your biological Father in your life. I'm happy for you, to know that your relationship with him is much better now, perhaps even making up for lost time.

With that said, I've learnt (a long time ago) that to have a father figure doesn't have to be the biological one. Anyway, cheers to all good Fathers out there! :kiss:

(When is Father's Day in the US anyway?)
 
My morning brainstorm

ICT pt2

ICT its time that I'm honest
If I don't do it now then I never ever will
I've swallowed you inside like a sweet small pill
Now all I do when I see you is feel.
Emotions run real
Reality sets in, and I'm trying to deal
The fact that you've even managed to steal
My heart away
Makes me smile even in a bad day.
ICT I'm true as I say this
To you,
You may step back
But I won't attack you with it
I'm just expressing a fact.
With you, I wanna spend time
Away from these rhymes
And make our own lyrical portrait.
Was afraid to say it,
But you should know this
I love you
And there's no other way around it.

ICT I have for a while now
Felt real uneasy
Considering life without you
Makes me very queasy.
And while I don't need thee
I kinda do need you
And all that you bring along beside.
No longer in a hidey hole shivering and shaking
Baby, you make my heart quake
This, there's no faking.
Just friends isn't the destiny
But you and me are purposed
For more than imaginings could show us.
Sometimes my chest feels like its about to burst open
Fever running so high
Cold air just goes over
You're revving me high just like a motor
I'm lost in you like a car sinking in a big ocean.
I've swallowed the potion
Number 9 is divine
My heart is calling yours on the new love line.
No pressure, take your time
Down the line you will find
That its there.
And I care
And will always be there.

ICT...I do.
 
LOL, maybe I should get my username changed to BodaciousB____ so anyone can fill in the rest!? :D (It would be quite interesting, if I say so ;))



*puts my hands up*

ME! :D

I like my suggestions. Lol. And you twisted my arm. I'll post it now
 
Socks pt2

Socked and sexy, sexy in socks
I feel my breath rattle
Like I'm just a box of rocks.
Sniffing and getting hungry
And my nose knows that smell.
Somebody's feeling my movements
My nose knows this well.
Brown fingers tracing
Pulling down socks
Sliding slowly down
Till they come completely off.
Standing uneasily, walking overhead
Tying wrists with sock cuffs
To the top if the bed.
No running or fighting now,
I'm ready to proceed
With what you've thought about
And what you right now need.
Stopping to kiss your lips as I trek back down
Tongue tapping your body
As I make my rounds.
I love hearing your voice
Making needy sounds
Submitting is what I want, now
Let's make up ground.
Me on you, mmm, quite the recipe
Your body arching, lifting
Reaching out for me.
Nipples peaking proudly
Begging for touch,
I only pinch and tweak,
My hunger pangs have increased.
Reaching my destination
Hands cupping your ass, I see your panties waiting
Eager for my touch,
Your lady's salivating.
Pulling you in close,
Imagining your first sensations.
Lips moving in
Gasping, my breath is bated
Lips teasing the fabric,
Mind blown at how it tasting.
Sliding them aside, its nirvana
No time for wasting.
I see your beauty before me
I feel myself quaking.
Tongue reaches out before me
Makes contact..
You start shaking.
Then your words become slurred.
Your vision becomes blurred.
And the last thing I heard
Before your thighs clamped...
Mmmmmmm.

Tbc
 
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that is seriously

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I can almost hear this page sizzling! :D
 
So, I used to write all the time.. and then all of a sudden I just stopped. I am going to try to pick it up again, but I have a feeling it will be no where near as amazing of what I've been reading here.. (lurking too as I havn't commented...:eek:)



I was never really good at breaking things up into proper lines, so I just write paragraphs. Hope thats allowed... :rolleyes: or very good at writing.. but hey!


I look at you from across the room, and all I can wonder is why. Why did things have to end like this? For so long, you were my only one, and for so long you were all I needed to survive. You were my breath, my smile, my source of life until you decided that I didn't need to live anymore. I tell myself that its over, and I'm better off, but, I know that if you came back.. I would be down on my knee's in seconds. I crave your touch, your taste, your love. Every day gets better, but sometimes I feel there are days where I go back in healing. I look at a funny picture, or I see a damn commercial for that damn super bowl, and I have to start all over again. It tears me up inside knowing that this hasn't phased you, that you're right back to drinking your cares away. I want to hurt you. I want you to be hurting. I want to be able to tell myself that I meant even just a portion of what you meant to me.

This is the end, there is no more. I want to say goodbye, but deep down, I know that I would rather be on my knee's.
 
So, I used to write all the time.. and then all of a sudden I just stopped. I am going to try to pick it up again, but I have a feeling it will be no where near as amazing of what I've been reading here.. (lurking too as I havn't commented...:eek:)



I was never really good at breaking things up into proper lines, so I just write paragraphs. Hope thats allowed... :rolleyes: or very good at writing.. but hey!


I look at you from across the room, and all I can wonder is why. Why did things have to end like this? For so long, you were my only one, and for so long you were all I needed to survive. You were my breath, my smile, my source of life until you decided that I didn't need to live anymore. I tell myself that its over, and I'm better off, but, I know that if you came back.. I would be down on my knee's in seconds. I crave your touch, your taste, your love. Every day gets better, but sometimes I feel there are days where I go back in healing. I look at a funny picture, or I see a damn commercial for that damn super bowl, and I have to start all over again. It tears me up inside knowing that this hasn't phased you, that you're right back to drinking your cares away. I want to hurt you. I want you to be hurting. I want to be able to tell myself that I meant even just a portion of what you meant to me.

This is the end, there is no more. I want to say goodbye, but deep down, I know that I would rather be on my knee's.

Well, you make yourself known! Actually, this is just a thread for anyone who wants to write. Lol so you fit right in. I love your transparency here. The hurt, and the honesty. Please post more.
 
That explains the lipstick stains!:D
Damn! I knew I forgot something! :rolleyes:

Okay...here's another one...be kind...

So you wanna bitch?
Moan and gripe?
Go ahead…
I’ll listen all night.
The world sucks.
The clouds are gray.
I even heard
We’re expecting rain.
There was even a bomb
And a hurricane.
A tree fell down,
A mountain blew up.
Yeah, the world sucks
Today.
But tomorrow…
What about then?
There might be
A smile
A wink
A rainbow...
You think?
Either way
I’m here
Next to you.
Not going anywhere so
Get used to it.
 
Damn! I knew I forgot something! :rolleyes:

Okay...here's another one...be kind...

So you wanna bitch?
Moan and gripe?
Go ahead…
I’ll listen all night.
The world sucks.
The clouds are gray.
I even heard
We’re expecting rain.
There was even a bomb
And a hurricane.
A tree fell down,
A mountain blew up.
Yeah, the world sucks
Today.
But tomorrow…
What about then?
There might be
A smile
A wink
A rainbow...
You think?
Either way
I’m here
Next to you.
Not going anywhere so
Get used to it.

Lol. This made me laugh
 
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