Neonurotic
Share some skin
- Joined
- Apr 22, 2011
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I don't know. Maybe, everyone's doing it, so why not me?
Lots of old stuff here from threads my name has been removed by Literotica. I don't think I'm even called "guest", its blank, like the threads I started. Some poems I imagine I'll come back to and nitpick, others are corralled like lost sheep.
Just a reminder, I've been around Literotica since 2002, writing as "neonurotic" and "Jamison", of which, both names were deleted in 2008. I recreated Neonurotic in 2011. I have no other alts.
First up is from The 5 Senses Poem Challenge thread:
Salty Dog
More sour than a grapefruit is
its bitter pith and her anger.
Though she is spent, her sweat
and skin, her memory is blood, is mine.
Her matter stains the Formica
and sticks to me like pleather,
her vinyl chairs.
I mix her with Stoli over cracked ice
while practicing a neat freak OCD
but, there is no scrubbing that clean.
Nothing, nothing gets that smell out
it just reeks bleach,
death and disappointment.
It lingers like golden oldies on KILU radio,
an Unchained Melody, broken.
Lots of old stuff here from threads my name has been removed by Literotica. I don't think I'm even called "guest", its blank, like the threads I started. Some poems I imagine I'll come back to and nitpick, others are corralled like lost sheep.
Just a reminder, I've been around Literotica since 2002, writing as "neonurotic" and "Jamison", of which, both names were deleted in 2008. I recreated Neonurotic in 2011. I have no other alts.
First up is from The 5 Senses Poem Challenge thread:
Salty Dog
More sour than a grapefruit is
its bitter pith and her anger.
Though she is spent, her sweat
and skin, her memory is blood, is mine.
Her matter stains the Formica
and sticks to me like pleather,
her vinyl chairs.
I mix her with Stoli over cracked ice
while practicing a neat freak OCD
but, there is no scrubbing that clean.
Nothing, nothing gets that smell out
it just reeks bleach,
death and disappointment.
It lingers like golden oldies on KILU radio,
an Unchained Melody, broken.
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