PurpleMonkeyDishwash
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I haven't written a story in a long time, and the idea that is drawing me back isn't very sophisticated or original, but I find it very sexy nonetheless.
I want to write a story about a very young married white couple where the wife Rachel has a slutty past that she is trying to move beyond. She did some light crime with her big black sexy boyfriend Reshawn in college, but he went to jail and she stayed out. Now, he's recently out of jail and he doesn't care that his ex is married. The husband Todd is of course reluctant, but when Rachel describes how Reshawn sacrificed himself for her, he lets the ex con move into his home. From here, Rachel slips towards more and more sexual favors for her ex until she's back in his arms.
I know it's overdone, but I would like to hear thoughts on how to develop the idea and what could go right. If any stories of this idea have been done, I would like to read them.
I want to write a story about a very young married white couple where the wife Rachel has a slutty past that she is trying to move beyond. She did some light crime with her big black sexy boyfriend Reshawn in college, but he went to jail and she stayed out. Now, he's recently out of jail and he doesn't care that his ex is married. The husband Todd is of course reluctant, but when Rachel describes how Reshawn sacrificed himself for her, he lets the ex con move into his home. From here, Rachel slips towards more and more sexual favors for her ex until she's back in his arms.
I know it's overdone, but I would like to hear thoughts on how to develop the idea and what could go right. If any stories of this idea have been done, I would like to read them.