erotica_n_s
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This scene depicts the moments BEFORE the lovers start having sex… So it’s NOT about the actual sex acts…
Tried this one here before…
Would like to see how other writers would do the same scene…
I wondered what it would be like for a man to walk into a room, and see this waiting for him:
It’s a “cuckold” story.
A stud has been hired to impregnate a woman. A venue has been chosen for the impregnation to be carried out. The stud and the woman have not met up until this moment.
The stud is a Caucasian man. The woman is Asian Indian.
The woman is a virgin. She is an “ingénue” type character – beautiful, sweet-natured, and innocent.
The stud is a wild hulk of a man.
He walks into the room, finds the young woman waiting for him there.
She is naked from the waist above. When the stud walks into the room, she reflexively flings her arms across her breasts, trying desperately to guard what remains of her dignity. But she becomes aroused as the man walks closer and closer to her. She also finds that the sensation of her own palms upon her nipples is pleasurable.
As she looks into his eyes, she becomes more and more sexually aroused, but also feels fear, shyness and nervousness.
So, the “challenge” is to depict the scene in words…
Depict the female character –
Depict the male character –
The male character looks something like this:
The male character represents strength, power, energy, wildness – he is a hulking, brutish, savage, beastly caveman, with a wild temper, which almost threatens to erupt into violence at the slightest provocation.
The female character is a sweet, gentle, innocent, nervous young woman, beautiful, nubile, submissive, timid and vulnerable. The fullness of her breasts, and the rich, healthy pinkness of her nipples, should be described in loving poetic detail.
I want the scene to depict how she is frightened as the stud walks into the room, how she is flooded with so many thoughts and urges, she almost doesn’t even fully understand what she feels… she is so intensely nervous, she is getting breathless, her shapely breasts rising and falling beautifully. As the stud gazes at her breasts, her lips start quivering, she starts trembling.
Describe the scene up to the point when the stud reaches out to touch the woman for the first time... the scene need not be described any further than that...
So… would like to see what other writers do with the idea…
By all means, take a look at my previous attempt...
Tried this one here before…
Would like to see how other writers would do the same scene…
I wondered what it would be like for a man to walk into a room, and see this waiting for him:
It’s a “cuckold” story.
A stud has been hired to impregnate a woman. A venue has been chosen for the impregnation to be carried out. The stud and the woman have not met up until this moment.
The stud is a Caucasian man. The woman is Asian Indian.
The woman is a virgin. She is an “ingénue” type character – beautiful, sweet-natured, and innocent.
The stud is a wild hulk of a man.
He walks into the room, finds the young woman waiting for him there.
She is naked from the waist above. When the stud walks into the room, she reflexively flings her arms across her breasts, trying desperately to guard what remains of her dignity. But she becomes aroused as the man walks closer and closer to her. She also finds that the sensation of her own palms upon her nipples is pleasurable.
As she looks into his eyes, she becomes more and more sexually aroused, but also feels fear, shyness and nervousness.
So, the “challenge” is to depict the scene in words…
Depict the female character –
• her beauty
• her youthfulness
• the sweetness, innocence, and vulnerability in her eyes
• the exquisite, well-proportioned, statuesque curvaceousness of her form
• how nervous she is, and also how aroused she is
• her youthfulness
• the sweetness, innocence, and vulnerability in her eyes
• the exquisite, well-proportioned, statuesque curvaceousness of her form
• how nervous she is, and also how aroused she is
Depict the male character –
• his virility
• he is a walking volcano of lust
• description of the man must be such that a female reader would become aroused by reading it.
• he is a walking volcano of lust
• description of the man must be such that a female reader would become aroused by reading it.
The male character looks something like this:
The male character represents strength, power, energy, wildness – he is a hulking, brutish, savage, beastly caveman, with a wild temper, which almost threatens to erupt into violence at the slightest provocation.
The female character is a sweet, gentle, innocent, nervous young woman, beautiful, nubile, submissive, timid and vulnerable. The fullness of her breasts, and the rich, healthy pinkness of her nipples, should be described in loving poetic detail.
I want the scene to depict how she is frightened as the stud walks into the room, how she is flooded with so many thoughts and urges, she almost doesn’t even fully understand what she feels… she is so intensely nervous, she is getting breathless, her shapely breasts rising and falling beautifully. As the stud gazes at her breasts, her lips start quivering, she starts trembling.
Describe the scene up to the point when the stud reaches out to touch the woman for the first time... the scene need not be described any further than that...
So… would like to see what other writers do with the idea…
By all means, take a look at my previous attempt...
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